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Aspiring writer and insatiable SciSet shipper. She/her. https://twitter.com/CraftableAlice


Sunset wants to practice using her empathy magic and her girlfriend, Twilight, offers to help. Twilight seems unexpectedly excited about the idea.

Through Twilight's memories, Sunset learns just how much she means to her girlfriend. How much she always meant to her ever since they became friends.

Thank you to my beta readers: Nyronus, Pwnego and especially JWolfSilver

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Comments ( 20 )

Pony Twilight may be the Princess of Friendship, but SciTwi is the Princess of Smooth.

This was a seriously cute little read and charming more or less all the way through. I'm glad I got to read it early.

Good job.

I'm a simple man.

I see a SciTwt x Sunset, I instant fav the sh*t out of that sacred couple.

Gold as always, Alice. ♡ ♛

Loved it, such a beautiful ending :)
Thank you for this, and good luck on your original fiction :)

This was really lovely. Very much in character for both of them: Twilight absolutely would plan something like this ahead in detail, and Sunset Shimmer would both beat herself up over the horrible things she did in the past, and be keen to find a way to practice controlling her magic. Believable, romantic, just great. :twilightsmile:

And indeed all the best for your original fiction endeavours!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thanks a bunch! :twilightsmile:

Aww, thank you so much! :twilightblush: :heart:

That was beautiful, sweet and very lovely. And the ending was just too wonderful. Thank you so much for this.

I'm a little sad that you might not be posting much of your work here anymore, but I'm definitely interested in seeing what you do next. And, well, if this end up being the last bit of SunLight we get from you, I can say that it's a wonderful send off. So, thank you for everything you've given us. I've very much enjoyed it, and look forward to seeing what you do next.

The Voice in the Water


Beautiful! Simply beautiful! :pinkiesad2:

Thank you for this wonderful story and best of luck to your original fiction! :twilightsmile:

Just as good the ....third? Time around. Its really awesome! Im glad could help with this!

ohmy that was wholesome

D'awww, this was adorable :rainbowkiss:

Correction offered without malice:

“Sunset!” she called out, searching the living room for her. The light’s where out, but she could clearly see Sunset’s form on the couch.

lights were

A wonderfully sweet story! I love it and wish you all the best in your original fiction endeavors!

This was your best work yet. And like all practice the more you do it the better you get. Good luck on original endeavors.

If you have to go, this is a fantastic note to end on. Thank you for it, ajd best of luck out there in original fiction land.

this was hands down the BEST iteration of this SciSet scenario I have EVER read. never before have I seen anything like it. you are a bloody genius!

That was absolutely adorable and if it is too be the last story you post here, it is an amazing note to go out on.

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