Oceans rise. Cities fall. Hope survives.
Wow.
Years in the future, but not many, Sunset Shimmer, now a grown adult, reflects on her life - primarily, her decision to stay in the human world - now known as Thanvion. Connections between Equestria and Thanvion have been widespread, with both cultures working and growing together, and many individuals crossing between the two as a sort of vacation.
But all is not well.
After a cataclysmic event and the defeat of the real Grogar, who aimed to destroy both Equestria and Thanvion, Sunset made the decision to stay in Thanvion. Now nearing what she thought to be the downwards slope of her life, she contemplates whether or not it was all worth it. However, a visitor from Equestria spurs on what may be Sunset's most important journey yet.
This story is told in an anachronistic fashion, in a prologue, fifteen chapters, an epilogue, and a postscript.
I'm very intrigued so far. Curious to know what in the world went wrong to make Sci-Twi go all Black Mirror on Thanvion, as well as why there's no mention of Sunset's other friends. Obviously dying to know what's going on with Luna, too. Consider me hooked! Eagerly looking forward to more.
What the heck happen to Twilight where are the others, why is Sunset suffering like this?!
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You will have to wait and see!
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I'm glad! I must thank you. I've found a good first comment does wonders for motivation.
Wow....Flash did not come off pathic what so ever.
Sorry seems Flash was sounding desperate, or something, and they didn't part on good terms.
I hope they just become friends not a Flash/Sun fan myself at all.
I love it when authors take the time to make unique set pieces like this. They always add a nice bit of flavour to the story, and it shows that the author is invested in it, which is very important!
As for the letter itself, hopefully Flash is gonna be okay. I can empathize with him to a certain degree. And I sincerely hope that's just a coffee stain in the corner and not anything worse. Time will tell I suppose.
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Agreed! All the Likes and Favourites in the world can't hold a candle to a nice, thoughtful comment.
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I'm glad you like it! Expect a couple more of these kinds of "chapters". This is a story I love and I'm really excited to tell it in a very unique way.
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Part of the magic of an anachronistic story is learning things out of order! In a story like this, presentation comes before reasonable order of information.
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