This story is a sequel to Twilight In Plain Sight
Blitz was once an athletic teen with supportive parents. Then things went really wrong.
Then she was alone and on the road, but she was a tough girl, and she could take it.
Then she met a boy. Not a man, that she learned far too late... but a good boy.
And now the good boy was gone, and it's four AM and the morning sickness has her up and staring in the mirror, wondering where that brilliant rainbow-haired teenager went when she wasn't looking.
Written for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting contest 'Colourful Characters #2: Rainbow Dash'.
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You utterly nail Rainbow's narrative voice in this one mate, still love the ending as well 👍
This was a feeling rollercoaster. Damn this was well done, but fuck it made me feel so sorry for Rainbow. So much potential thrown away in an accident - or maybe bad decision? I wonder if her daughter's ever going to meet her grandparents.
On that, is Rainbow guilty? Is it meant to be open to interpretation? Does she even know? So many questions it raises, with a so bleak future. But still she has hope, and that matters a whole damn lot.
Both stories; this and the previous were really good
Ouch. I wonder how she will take it when she finds out about Fluttershy and the mess that is developing around her?
To the lost
Always good to hear more from this world, even if it's from one of the more desperate and confused corners of it. Blitz has a lot to think about, but I have no doubt she'll do everything to make her kid worthy of the name. I just hope she can trust that the witch really does have her best interests at heart. At least she's taking the responsibility seriously now.
Shit, dude.
I just want to know who the 'witch' is.
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Er, Dusk Shine?
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Ah! Figured, but forgot that detail. :B
My immediate thought when reading this description:
https://youtu.be/ulJXiB5i_q0
Leave it to
to decide to make pregnancy a contest, a competition. That does feel damn scary accurate for one way she would approach this.