Be it the result of breaking physics or mysterious magic, Rainbow Dash winds up in our world as a human! Saved from the harsh wilds of urban earth by a 20 year old carpenter, Rainbow Dash must now learn to cope in this new realm full of walking talking magicless hairless and merciless monkeys. With the help of Ray and others will the grounded pony turned human soar the skies again? Will Rainbow Dash help lighten up Ray's serious and carefree attitude? Will Journey ever get old? Does throwing a wrench into a sputtering engine fix it? Probably not.
Chapters (9)
Hmmmm... curious about where this will go... I'll be watching you
i like
Uhm... You forgot the italics on!
Also, can't wait to see how it ends!
EDIT: Holy shit! EVEN COMMENTS ARE IN ITALICS! WHAT THE HAY IS GOING ON!?
Interest piqued.
1121105 You sir are having a computer issue, xD. Or maybe I am seeing no italics!
Hm....
EDIT: Oh waitz, Im seeing half of the story Italic.... Well, that explains it, xD
You know what
CONTINUE.
1121200 Now it's fixed, by the way. I don't see any italics comments now.
Now my thoughts on the story itself, I for one, LOVED THE FUCK OUTTA IT. Now, please continue it before I sue you for Emotional Harm. xD
1121411Oh you all flatter me
Please, no lawsuits Iz only a poor wittle writerz 
1121440 Then write MOAR, lol. This is probably the best out of the 30 new ones I've read today. Now, the only issue I face is having to wait for more chapters... :/
1121447 Well, fear not, for I plan on getting the next one out by late tonight or early tommorow
I got a little over excited at the positive feedback and had couldn't wait to see what you all think about the second chapter as well 
Great story so far! I cant wait for more:). I have read one of the most perfect stories yesterday, and he posted 23 chapters in 2 days that took me a whole day to read0_0. 23 chapters in 2 days! Over a thousand words each! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!
great story brah
keep it up. i will be watching you.... 
and i see italics for the last couple paragraphs... not sure if it's me, or you left them on or it was done on purpose for some reason i cannot comprehend. oh well
I like that Ray guy, he has all the right reactions.
My friend who is a hater would either love this because it takes place in Toronto, or insulted because it takes place in Toronto. This seems like a good story and you have my favorite.
1126029 hahaha I don't know why but I find that really funny
That last sentence needs some commas
Beyond that this story, is pretty good
Continue
This.... was..... so.... amazing....
Oh. My. God. Only two chapters and I'm convinced that this is the best human fic to be written yet. I loved this, I really hope moar comes soon...
Also note, I do not think you rushed it IMO. The pace is perfectly steady, although I'd like to see a little more words put into the chapters. But hell, I love it and it's your writing, do whatever you please.
1138080 More words is why I'm giving myself until sunday
, and thanks for the support, I write for people like you 
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Sundaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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I can't wait that long.
1138118 Well at least it's better than those people who wait a month and only release like 2000 word chapters D: You'll have to wait
But I will not disappoint (I hope)
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I agree. I still have bookmarks of people who haven't updated in like 5 months. Makes me mad to because most of them were great stories. Now they are just idling on the site.
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Pretty much sums up how I feel about it. Funny too, I used to hate reading until I started reading the FiMFics. It's like I gives me a good feeling, these stories on here are also the first thing to ever make me cry (multiple times) Like every day I'd much rather read on here than hop on Gears 3 or play some CSS
1138259 I never started liking reading until I was twelve and my mom bought me some books (she thought I was A.D.D but I was actually just a really energetic child) and then I fell in love with reading. I got into writing around the same time when my teacher would give us story starters and I would blow them out of proportion for shits and giggles. I thought I was being hilarious and defiant, but I was actually just impressing my teacher.
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Sometime when I have time off I really want to write my own fic. However I am a bit afraid that it won't look very good. I have a wide range of vocabulary but when it comes to writing I seem to lose it all at once and the writing seems dull and boring. My two ideas I have been working on is a human fic and an octa scratch.
1138301 Well you never know unless you try! Those two would make an awesome fic together (and they have many times). But having a wide vocabulary isn't the same as having a wide imagination, which is where writing comes from. If you sling together big words with no story behind it, you'll look pretentious, but if you can use your words and your imagination, you can truly come out with something amazing! If you do end up writing this fic, I'll make sure to read it
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It would also be nice to have a tester to read it for me and point out the mistakes I make.
Thanks! Gives me a lot of encouragement!
1138348 If you'd let me I'd gladly do it :3 I've always wanted to teach
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very good. keep writing 5/5 moustaches
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Keep up this story, It just gets better!
Friday though......I need more, and quickly!
Exactly what I expected, she's getting attached, hopefully she doesn't get lost.
1166509 OMG THAT PROF PIC MAKES YOUR COMMENT AMAZING
Keep on keepin on man!
good chapter.
1166528 Hehe I'm surprise this profile pic isn't more popular!
Ha, I was in the Eaton centre when somebody got shot.
1166585 Well, that's something to brag about... I guess xD
Great, why do I get the feeling that our Dashie is going to run into some of Toronto's odder denizens? Anyway's cant wait for more.
1166585 .........
What.... the?
You should use "voulait" instead of "était" for it to be correct.
You tried to translate "I don't care" I guess. You should say "Je m'en moque."
"Seulement les filles" would be better.
"Venez ici"
Most people don't care I suppose , but as a french brony I might as well point that out.
Interesting concept
1220883 I appreciate the corrections. My french is terrible, which is silly because I'm Canadian
. (And no, I didn't use google translate, that thing is sooooo inaccurate). I have better spanish than french, but French makes more sense for this fic
I'm definitely loving it so far, some people may consider the romance a little rushed, but I personally find it to be a pleasant change from the incredibly long and drawn out ones I usually read (each to their own, I like both). So, keep up the good work I suppose, it's good to know when you'll publish chapters rather than doing it sporadically, gives me something to look forward to!
1224793 I was worried about that x_x But not to worry, it will all be settled soon. Besides, think of it as a petty crush for now
1224804 Honestly, I genuinely like it and would agree that as the 'relationship' stands, it hasn't gone far, but a lot of the time it takes a few chapters for the protagonist to even realise any feelings at all, let alone accept them. Write it how you like it, don't try to please everyone and it'll turn out fine
Also if you ever find yourself in need of an editor, feel free to get in touch with me, I do a little editing here and there and find myself with a good deal of free time but lacking anything to do with it. Nonetheless, good luck with your story!
1138301 Go for it! Although I do have one tip, get the first few chapters down first before you publish them: I aren't an awfully creative person and I made a mistake in writing each chapter then posting them, almost instantly stuff came up in my life and I had to grind things to a halt, and I started struggling for ideas, so it's just left there stewing on hiatus, hopefully now that my life has gone back to normal I can divert more attention to it. But as long as you have an idea in mind and a bit of determination, do it - I'll be sure to take a look if you ever start writing.
Kick some ass Ray, do it for Dash!
Your tardiness is unforgivable! Don't make me sic Twilight on you. If she has to show you why it's important to get things done in t timely manner you won't be happy about it.
That aside, nice chapter dood! Saw some typos here and there, but nothing too egregious. And now, on with the heroic rescue attempt that will most likely end up nearly getting him killed!