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Mare Of Mystery


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"N-NO! It's not true...THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!" Sunbursts lifted himself from the pole lamp just behind the sofa

That was a Star Wars reference wasn’t it?

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Noticed this you did, but the title, you did not! Hmmm

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Paying attention, I was not.

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i wonder how long the two of you could keep this up?

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How long you want us to, it depends on.

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im just wondering if i should come back next week will this still be going on but slower or in 3 days will there be over 300 comments of you two just going back and forth

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*whacks you with cane*
Wonder not! Wondering leads to worry, worry leads to fear, fear leads to jealousy; the shadow of greed, that is!
Let go of your wondering, you must, or fall to the dark side, you will.

Applejack probably wouldn't see what the big deal is either. :ajsmug: :rainbowlaugh:

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But I heard that the dark side has cookies

Comment posted by Darth Arcaneus deleted January 20th

Cadence to Starlight and Sunburst: If you will not be turned, you will be DESTROYED!!!

"Starlight dear! It's alright that you had sex with your secretive twin brother!" she yelled loud in front of the door, "Incest is the most precious type of love out there! It links two loving souls together only getting weighed down by their sibling relati—"

Lost it at this moment.

"Pfft, so what your brother nailed you Starlight? Didn't stop me in the past..."

Cadence's eyes bulged up in fury, "You WHAT!?"

Why is she so upset about this now? It's the most precious type of love!

Shining strangely enough chuckled hysterically with sweat beads running down his forehead, "Oh, you poor-poor thing...you bucked your sister...who would ever do such dastardly deed!? I know I won't..."

Really...?

"Starlight dear! It's alright that you had sex with your secretive twin brother!" she yelled loud in front of the door, "Incest is the most precious type of love out there! It links two loving souls together only getting weighed down by their sibling relati—"

The princess of love everyone!

"Pfft, so what your brother nailed you Starlight? Didn't stop me in the past..."

Hahhahaheheheheehehehhihihihih....OOFED

"N-NO! It's not true...THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!"

Star Wars quote. Nice touch.

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It's true, we do have cookies. Cake too!

This could use an editor, and a few revisions.

Aside from that, a pretty interesting idea. 5/10

15 minutes ago

If you want to use a transition like this instead of a more natural one, you should probably make it stand out from the rest of your text.

Soon after the reached the map room

They.

Everyone pointing out the Star Wars quote and no one notices the JoJo reference in the chapter title.

“It's just that, she had sex with Sunburst who was her long-lost brother. The secret was kept by her parents, and they just figured it out today...”

“Pfft, so what your brother nailed you Starlight? Didn't stop me in the past...”

Cadence's eyes bulged up in fury, “You WHAT!?”

That ending!!!!:rainbowlaugh:
EPIC!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This was kind of hilarious in its own right.
Good work.

I hope I wasn't the only one who, as soon as they read Cadence's "You WHAT?!", instantly inserted the clip of that guy in Spongebob in the April Fools episode saying that exact same quote.

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