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Starlight Glimmer knew that magic wasn't enough to manipulate ponies. To get them to see things as she knew they were and change themselves, she needed to say the right things. She would do more than bring ponies to water because her words would make them drink it too.

Double Diamond just knows he will be listening to Starlight Glimmer, and extra careful to obey. Anything to keep him away from that house.


Takes place before Season Five's opening episodes 'The Cutie Map'.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 14 )

>No link to TV Tropes

Not Iceverse, then...

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Yeah, unless I add some sort of sequel or anything then it’s probably not going to be connected to anything else.

“Nopony loves Starlight Glimmer.”

Starlight stopped smiling when Double Diamond spoke. “That’s right,” she murmured, voice taut and shadowing its usual clipped, authoritative cheer.

Poor crazy bitch :pinkiesad2:

10040755
Yeeeep. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment that made me chuckle.

i must admit i be kinda interested in finding out what a reformed glimmer would do meeting him again

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If I ever picked up a storyline/series with this, that is certainly something I would want to explore too. Thanks for reading!

"What else have you learned?" Starlight looked expectantly, with fierce hard eyes but a suspicious firm smile.

"I've learned..." Double Diamond darted his eyes.

"Yes?"

"I've learned, uh,"

"I'm listening." Starlight huffed as Double Diamond swallowed a wad of spit, closed his eyes, and spat

"I've learned I'm a flaming homosexual."

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Oh my goodness Filly this isn’t the story for gay puns
But I like it 👀👍

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wdym there are stories that aren't?

Brr...this gave me the chills, Starlight here is so utterly convinced that she is unloveable because of past hurts that she dare not let anyone close to her again is troubling, especially since it reminds me of someone I was talking to recently who wishes that the world keep its distance, they won't dare try anything new or let anyone close because they fear always being in the wrong, of being hurt.

As someone else commented, I wonder how things would go should Starlight run back into Double Diamond again. Maybe since in the finale, we saw Starlight standing alongside Sunburst and Trixie she could run into him and it would be super awkward, but that in of itself would make for a compelling short story, the unease would be palpable to the reader.

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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm not really sure if this storyline will be continued, but if it didn't I'd probably turn the focus to Double Diamond.

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