• Member Since 19th Sep, 2019
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My Little Rainstorm


I know I'm weird. I know I'm strange. I know I'm awkward. But at least I'm me.

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When Princess Luna must leave Canterlot for a few weeks, she decides there is only one pony she trusts enough to care for her precious student: Twilight Sparkle. Unfortunately, she forgot to mention a few things. Things such as, 'don't let her near the Cutie Mark Crusaders'. Eh, those are just minor details... Right?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Here's my problem with this story. I love the idea, but you fail miserably to explain too much. Like how Luna and Stardust even got to this point.

It is nice to see Moonbutt break the mold and not pick a unicorn as a student.

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Yeah... this is like my 13th time rewriting the beginning. Everything will be explained, it was just too much for the first chapters.

Originally, Stardust was supposed to be a calm, quiet, Luna-like unicorn. Then I started to think about how Luna would react to having a NON-unicorn student and... voila! Pegasis Stardust was born!

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Fyi, it's spelled "Pegasus" XD

Nice. Are there more chapters coming soon?

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Yes. Chapter 3 (I'm way too lazy to come up with actual chapter names) is almost finished and should be posted tomorrow. Chapter 4 is semi-written, but I am probably going to rewrite it.

Scootaloo is adorable.
That is all.

This was a great chapter! I still liked it. XD
Oof, glad your family's better now.......that must've been pretty scary.

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