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TheBronyKnight


I write about the things that people may find unimportant, but to me they are the right questions that need attempted answers. paypal.me/funkMonster

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Applebloom wakes up to the feeling of heat and the suffocation of smoke. Not knowing the cause of the heat or the unnatural color of the flames, Applebloom tries to escape but ends up finding a darker story unfolding in the inferno.

Part of 1000ish horror writing practice.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

10035865
I don't know yet. Do you like it?

I think it’s interesting

She has been least likely to hang out with the cutie mark crusaders and even offedthe middle school camping trip due to the presence of a campfire

The word offed seems kinda of weird to me.
How about

and even ditched in the middle of a camping trip

Other than pacing, I loved it.

10036357
Ok. I'll learn and practice better pacing for the next horror.

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