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Jizzes in excitement from a new chapter.
Ooohh, looks like you accidentally left in all the Gdocs comments in Whatmustido.
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God dammit, I thought that was fixed. Now I'm going to get five more comments from people saying the same thing after opening the chapter immediately, waiting twelve hours, and then reading it and posting without refreshing or looking at the comments.
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Aha! I always refresh before posting so I didn't do that.
I guess I should say something about this chapter now, I don't really have much. I prefer chapters that really move the story along, this is just mostly character development. Interesting to learn about the potential consequences of Nav's murder (and his previous ones).
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I liked comments though
Anyways. Not an action packed chapter. But I liked the character development that happend. It's probably the most to occur in any chapter to date. And I liked hearing Spikes prospective on life. It's diffrent yet familiar.
8125781 Congrats on 150 chapters mate!
Inner Monologue
150+ chapters. Should I do it?
I think you should.
But it's too corny, even for me.
So? Hasn't stopped you before.
I still don't want-
Give in to the inner voices.
But-
Do it!
...Fine.
...I hate you.
Love you too.
8125781 I saw that and thought there was someone(thing) watching Nav... 0.o
Love it, whatmustido. Loving your character develpment with Flo and Twi. Loving everything.
I can't wait for more.
Dem doc comments.
I'm still just waiting for the tipping point that causes Nav to use true magic and destroy reality.
Truly enjoying this story and it's character development. This story is definitely my all time favourite. Best part about this story right now is that its only halfway done if that. Looking forward to future updates!
I wanted to leave a comment about how great your story is and how much I enjoy reading it... But then I realized that it'd take too much brainpower to come up with something original. So I'll just say: Gr8 stary bruh, I ned MOAR!!1!1
There's something missing from this chapter, which is Nav bitching out the Waters for letting Gilda get almost killed.
I feel a bit guilty falling off one of my favourite HiE stories, and one which inspired me to write my own, but with all the chapters I've missed I don't think I have the time. I just hope my own story will grow to the scale that your ships has.
Happy writing,
The Professor
Pff this is exactly what I was thinking at the time.
I did, however, fight basically the Lord of Hell, a bunch of demons, and a bunch of regenerating ghost demons and kicked their asses to death an average of about 5 times each. But nah, I'm still pretty much useless.
Finally someone gives Nav the "Are you dumb? True magic is the same as dream magic, fool! Just do it when you're awake!" speech.
I found 3 in this one:
https://imgur.com/a/myegP
While it doesn't seem likely to happen, I'm very curious how Nav and Flo would change if they were seperated. I think it was mentioned which two might have been a better match for Nav, but I also wonder just exactly who it would have been, and how different Nav might have been had a choice been availabe from the start. Oh the game of Ifs, so many questions, so few answers.
Between this and the Infinite Black Sand Desert, I suspect DEATH is following Nav with extreme intrest. Sort of like a personal project?
Im suprised Pinkie has time to do nothing on board the ship, what with all the water tentacles and pneumatic toys possible. Then again, given Gilda now has Fiery putting a dump on things, either Blaze will realise his overall place with Celestia grinding him like a damp squib, or his ego is going to be that great that he just gets angrier and angrier until he needs being dealt with, screwing up the whole situation, all as calculated?
I wonder about what did Blaze and Aerie talked with Celestia... Maybe Aerie could be a good friend for Celestia and maintain her from get bored.
It's been a while. It's nice to remember that I can just read through this entire story again if I ever get bored. Only takes about a week of dedication
Reading this story from start to the current chapter is a massive undertaking. It's the equivalent of reading 20 decent sized books. Most series I've read never reach anywhere near this length. If anything this is closer to a multi-season tv show...
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You just gotta believe in yourself, fam.
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Pinkie's not a nympho (that's Doppel), she just likes putting smiles on faces. There are other ways to go about that than sex.
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No she's not shut up
Uguuuuuuuooooooh,I keep wanting the next chapter to come out faster as I keep reading.Keep up the good work
Oh boy, Celestia sparring and training Navarone, and I love that quote, "All will fear to oppose you" just sends joyful expectations down my spine.
It'll be awesome to see Navarone start building to the point he can take down Celestia without magic resistance, if she starts to train him in true magic as well.
this is gonna be sweet.
Nav's "desert" explanation of depression was spot on.
As always, good job with this chapter, looking forward to the next one.
So from the nice interaction and character growth nav has had because of flo I gotta figure one of two things is gonna happen. 1) One of the pair is going to fuck up incredibly badly and force a split between the two of them. 2) Flo's gonna fucking die. I really hope it's neither of those, but my angst senses are getting all tingly.
Watch, watch as slowly Navarone becomes Discord's antithesis. You all remember that ancient hero? The Naga's sacred chosen one? The one Discord tried so desperately to help, to aid his own destruction that it all fell apart? All the trials and tribulations he was meant to go through? And now we see history repeat itself. But this time... Discord has taken the kid's gloves off. This time, he has learned from his mistakes. By saving the hero of old from trials he spelled his own doom, so this hero shall experience suffering tenfold! This hero, Discord will make hate him... THIS hero, will not fail to finally, FINALLY. Make. It. End.
His dick cant be too big. As TFS Alucard would say: "Honestly, if you're going to have a dick fighting competition with a woman, you must have started off with the worlds cruelest handicap"
8127370 To be fair Nav used to have a dick, so at least they have a reference point.
8127376 Meh, I dont think Blaze knows that. Besides, would Nav even remember his own dick measurements? Seems like a kinda weird thing to keep in your mind considering what he was like before coming to Equestria
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He got to show that off when he was as changeling, remember?
You know, a little over 200k words and this fiction will be the most longest story of fimfiction :o right now, you're on second :D
8127412 Im actually growing to dislike flo, and the relationship she has with navarone. Shes gotten Pretty annoying since she was released, punishing nav even worse than before. Its good hes changing, but these elementals shouldnt have really any say especially after letting gilda die. They get mad when he was in the right to kill the kobold. Sure violence begets violence but the elementals are fucking pussies honestly. And im tired of Flo just doing these "naughty things" flo has changed a lot and its only getting worse, fixing navs mind with the chemical imbalance and changing kats mind even if she wanted to do something bad. You can tell more than ever in this chapter their relationship is somewhat straining and they should probably be seperated. Nav either needs to remove her or the elementals kick her out... he was fine before flo entered his mind and she did make this story more interesting but like i said its just annoying and dumb at this point. Mindless filler and i want nav to go back to being independent and not bending over to these ponies and elementals. Spike was right. They are predators. The ponies and elementals will never understand, not even celestia. So pleas.e twll me this is going somewhere. Whamustido is smart and hes gotten this far along. Im sure its going to get a lot more interesting.
Buck that. He has two claws; he can rub both our bellies!” the other one said.
That whole scene killed me.
I'm dead.
I'm ghostwriting this as a ghost.
Fucker
"Hoof".
Did Navarone get this saying incorrect on purpose or what?
Twilight never changed Navarone back to human. Well, back from a pony.
This made me laugh more than I think it should have.
It seems like under Flo's goodie-two-shoes are some very dark socks.
Every chapter ends with me immediately wanting to read the next one. And if I was not already completely caught up, I probably would. I love this story. The chapters are so long and reading them is so fulfilling. Yet without another chapter to read, I just feel empty. I think I am in love with your brain meat.
With bated breath, I await the next chapter.
~KBO.
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Fixed
You've never heard that?
Look two paragraphs up.
Instead of 'Life is only a dream', Celestia should have said "Life is only an RPG."
She's getting too big for her britches and doesn't realize it yet.
Please don't skull-rape me.
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rip
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(no she's not shut up)
Looking back, I have to wonder. How much of Navarone's acceptance of her new condition stems from her spiritual link with Ava? How much of Ava's personality has bled through? And on top of that, how much of her new disposition stems from
Flo. Speaking of which, she has been rather..... clingy... lately hasn't she? Oh well, I guess we'll see.
Is it me, or has it been strangely long since something has gone meaningfully wrong for our main cast? It's just, across continents, through unspeakable peril, and no one with a name seems to have died. Everything just... keeps going. Almost as if Discord himself were puppeteering this little expedition, ensuring nothing would go wrong. I suppose this gives center stage to Nav's ongoing internal conflicts. It seems she still has no close friends. Her hedonistic escapism is only being enabled by those around her. She is still so broken inside. And nothing is changing. The journey goes on, but as many bridges as she builds, as many cracks she tries to seal, she is just the same. Perhaps sadder. Perhaps. Who knows, by the end she might truly have repaired her broken mind and accepted the world around her. Or she might die. Hell, she might get her dick back. But who knows? Sure as hell not any of us sitting in the audience, at least.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Happy 150th.
So. Dildos at high noon, then?
8127714 Neat.
The saying is "let's not and say we did". Though, in this case, it would be "can we not and say we dd". But saying it improperly on purpose is an acceptable form of parody.
Ah, I see now.
Then grinding would have two meanings when Navarone and Celestia are together.
Just like a woman to not realize when she is putting on a few pounds. Oh well, all the more of her to love.
You have no idea how many people ask me not to skull rape them every day. I will just say that I am very close to getting a free submarine sandwich.
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I'm merely speculating but there are very few things that could throw Nav much farther into the deep end. Something happening to Flo or Taya are probably one of those things. I feel that something is affecting/changing Flo, whether it's Nav's personality and memories, or some external source. I can't wait to see where the story goes but do worry as Flo has been my favourite character.
Crap. I was already having trouble getting invested into each new chapter because I can't help but dwell on the prediction that Nav will put off the whole soul issue until it's "too late" because it'd be "dramatically convenient" to the point of risking cliché.
(It's a problem I have with fiction. Unless the author is good enough to write something like Days of Wasp and Spider, where I feel I can trust that the character is not being set up for a fall because "it would be a misstep in this kind of story and the author is clearly too skilled for that", I huddle back in my emotional armour whenever I anticipate the possibility... which can easily mean I read tens or hundreds of thousands of words with my emotions "cringing back in anticipation of a blow" which never comes.)
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If you're going Pokérap, you might as well look at Starbomb's parody of it.
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...I need to look up more Starbomb songs.
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Here's a playlist with all of the songs that got official videos and here's an unofficial video for another track I like called Crasher-vania.
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I think Flo gave him another dose of mind whammy:
This is aparently the resolution to the incident with Nav becoming a "better" person... This is exactly what happened when Nav killed the Shaman!
It was already "I'll let you try the peaceful route first" and the waters let Glida (not quite) die, or is the first kill now free?
Next time when 2 crew members die and Nav gets violent is he going to be made to up that number to 3?
Also the conversation with Twi/Flo about Kat: yeah the ownership thing is a problem, everything else also applies to Twi or do we all forget everything that she did to him? Also Flo, didn't you just bitch out Nav about forgiveness right before refusing to forgive Kat's past?
PS I really enjoy this story, those 2 things just stuck out to me.
8127412 Ah yes, how could I forget Nav's time as a changeling and the tentacle-ly fun he had with Chrissy...
I am still anticipating the 420 Blaze.
Sometimes i feel kinda sad that i can't offer real in depth comments some others like to leave. But then when i realize that my simpler attitude towards reading lets me enjoy more stories without tainting the feeling with annoyance at simple mistakes or convoluted shit. But being able to see some of the deeper aspects of a story would be nice.
8127762 I've got mine if you've got yours