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I want to get of Navarone's wild ride.
Update.
Please sir may I have another?
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I had just caught up.
I had just read the ENTIRE story in 3 days. I was going to go to bed.
You bastard. I love you please don't kill me.
Rather enjoying the story though, seems from a quick glance I can expect a new chapter roughly every 2 weeks from here on out, which is going to suck so hard. If you know what I mean.
are you killing me off?
yes. Yes he is.
fuck you pinkie
WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?
she said-
I think we better stop at that.
I agree, let us return to ponyville. This place is... Strange...
yea, sure. But uhhh... I'm still a bit -tied up- with things so you can all go ahead without me.
Oh boy, few things make me as giddy as this story.
I saw that diaries of a madman was featured on the front page today congrats
1114767 You must be a prophet since this is now the longest fiction on this site.
I may be incorrect, but you seem to have an intense hatred, or at least fairly concentrated scorn, for anime, manga, and such things related to it. And if not you, then Nav. Any particular reason why?
4921737 you should be ashamed and proud good sir
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DOAM is auto-featured every time it updates due to being a good story. Also, the notification made my night, thanks whatmustido!
bet
northern twang perhaps? Southerners have a drawl and Babs' accent is generally considered to be from the Bronx.
Also, Nightmare Night was such a great chapter I think I'll read it again just because. Could it be that Filthy Rich wants an encore?
4921651 You should be ashamed of yourself.
good god man.... why is this story so damn good!
and i hope he/she gets her dick back soon..... though i don't think you need to change the gender just yet, it would be more fun that way.
and seriously waiting flo to get out, that will make me very happy.
Awesome
Hey, even Big Mac needs some love.
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Fixed bet. The other one was Applebloom talking, and she doesn't have a northern accent.
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Oh, whoops. It stood out to me because I normally only see "southern drawl" or "northern twang." It reads like "cheap gas."
4921651 The ride never ends B, the ride never ends.
Personally I was a little dissapointed Nav went and got into a relationship with Celestia. Her and Spike always seemed to get along much better, with none of the manipulation going on in her relationship with Celestia, while with Spike it always seemed more of a meeting of equals.
not to mention a relationship with spike would result in hot dragon dickIt's good to be reading these again. This was fun. I would comment on the story a bit, but....
This has always been one of those fics where I finish reading, and I don't really want to comment on anything. I like to sit and let it stew for a while. Speechless, is what it is, I suppose. Another excellent chapter. I enjoyed it greatly.
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Woo-hoo I fucking love this story! Keep it up :D
This has been bugging me. In the past you have used the because magic or because ponies excuse and each time it has played very well. The thing that has been bugging me is the random little bits of non explainable technologies. How do they have a vibrating toy that doesn't have a direct spell put on it and how did they make silicon or plastic sex toys if that stuff doesn't exist there are a couple to mention (unless it was some weird other material which wouldn't make sense because the flim flam fucks could have used that to make wheels for their cars(unless there all wooden or some shit which I highly doubt)). I also want to know how the fuck not a single pony knew about the cats until there were problems. Didn't a bunch of ponies escape there after the ban went into place. Another thing is nav being so fucking oblivious. He apparently read all the books in twifucks library, yet he is always being told random shit and not knowing it at all. I AM READING YOUR STORY AND I EXPECT YOU TO MAKE IT PERFECT AND HAVE NO FLAWS YOU MOFO MOFO. NOW GIVE ME TWENTY MORE CHAPTER BY THE END OF THE WEEK OR I MIGHT TELL MY MOM ON YOU.
Could I request less references to da periods................... he never shuts up about that. And fuck everyone who wants spike and nav together, that would just be weird and fucktarded.
9/10th if this is an epic win.
Fluttershy however was an abysmal failure. I still have hope 'Shy.
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Too similar to not post.
Meh...Just put my opinion out there and imeadiately got two down.......such is life...im aint gonna complain...
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I've hated it ever since I was a wee lad. I was young and impressionable. Toonami was still a thing, and Sailor Moon was on. Their skirts were so short... It took me months to realize I would never see an upskirt shots. Months. And then I still had hope, so when Inuyasha started coming on Adult Swim, I tried again. More months wasted. Fuck anime. Cowboy Bebop's one of the only ones that isn't shit.
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It was explained in 109. They use magic crystals to power their shit.
Watcher mentioned somewhere that he and several others had known about the cats, it's just that they didn't realize the information was important until it was too late. In a place without TV, it's possible for stuff like that to go unknown for ages. Hell, just look at the ponies in Ponyville: Almost none of them even knew what a griffin was, despite living just a few hundred kilometers away from a country full of them.
What random shit is he being told that he doesn't know, that might actually be in the library of a place that has a habit of censoring history?
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If you look at the gdoc, you can see that I have that as a comment.
I'm starting to love Flo more and more..
I hope there is more of her in the next chapters ~
This hype train is on a non-stop journey to POWER MOVE CITY!
TGAP TRIXIE vs NAVARONE
(tgap= the great and powerful.)
((Que mortal kombat music))
Keep being awesome WhatMustIDo!
Why is it over a million words, why not something reasonable;e like 100,00.
Nice chapter, love the beaver dam you pulled on babs seed, Taya need to strangle a bitch soon, hopefully -->
All in all, good chapter....
....
Actually, if I assume right in that you're going to kill Trixie when she fights them again, I would absolutely adore it if you had her throat crushed by Taya in front of Twilight.... Or all the mane 6.... Or hell, if you can pull it off, mane 6 and Celestia, Maybe add the brutality of a neck snapping sound too.
Would love that, oh so very much....
If it messes up the plot of the whole story though, in some way or another, would love it if you let me know you considered it for more than a second or two.
Bye-bye
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A) All that shit about inventions? Same reason there's a steam train but no industrial revolution.
B)The cats are pretty obvious here. People that get over there can't get back for obvious reasons. Any attempt to get letters back couldn't be done. Oh and no fucking telephones/fire-breathing-dragons.
C) Are you fucking stupid? No motherfucker reads something and stores every single piece of information. Besides. There's only so much you can understand when you're stuck in a world that expects you to fully understand magic and has used this completely foreign thing as it's basis for EVERYTHING.
My verdict: Go home.
I just realized how unhappy I will be when this story ends. Also when nav threatened to tear out my eyes I thought it said teat out my eyes lol
man im gonna have to start takin notes when i read this cuz there's so much i want to comment on but i forget wat i was gonna say by tha time im done
Random Thought: how amazing would tha show be if it was more mature... cute theme,and characters with a dark undertone kinda like mahou shoujo madoka magica. Twilight and tha gang havin philosophical thoughts about what there goin though in each episode. its y i love this story so much
I am still astonished how I survived those 122 chapters of you wonderful story without dying from laughter several dozen times.
And Flo really is a killjoy. Never lets Nav have fun by killing him/herself.
But seriously, how am I still alive?
Dragon
4922090 more words=enjoyment
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I think you might have dropped a zero from the end of the number you said. Instead of 100,00, did you mean 100,000?
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Oh boy, here we go. I will never understand the logic of people that push crack ships like these. Maybe you can explain why y'all manage to miss and ignore not only hints but outright statements that your Nav/Spike thing is going nowhere fast? Nav treats Spike like a dangerous child normally and then like an adolescent on a good day. Nav has borderline never treated Spike like an equal and Fear and Loathing in Canterlot was a loooooong time ago and unintentional besides. The whole point of all the work he's putting into grooming Spike is because he feels the need to correct that unacceptably un-dragonlike childishness. Did you skip past the parts where Nav has consistently wanted nothing to do with Spike sexually and also the parts where he's not gay?
Furthermore, I don't think you understand what the word "manipulative" means. Fleur de Lis is manipulative. Rarity is manipulative. Celestia is authoritative. Feel free to look that one up and the compare it with how Celestia deals with Nav. Even with that, they are closer to being equals than Nav/Spike and I sincerely hope you weren't blindsided by this hookup. You're worse than the ones that thought Nav/Fluttershy was something warranting serious consideration.
Anyway, 10/10, you have me ranting about shipping in MLP fanfiction.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
4922423 I'm going to interpret that "I will never understand" as "I don't understand", in the hopes that you are not simply refusing to see the viewpoint of another.
Nav says she is not gay and will never be in a relationship with a male? That he is not interested in a relationship with Spike? Just like he use to say he was human and would never have sex with a pony? That he would never find them attractive?
Nav is a bit confused on her own sexuality right now, odd as that seems. Someone who is as "straight" as Nav claims to be does not enjoy sex with the "wrong" gender, but Nav has had sex as a female with a male and enjoyed it. Sure, Nav prefers females; but she's bi, even if she doesn't like that fact right now.
As for why people want Spike to get Nav? Let's look at the various options she has:
Celestia: Celestia represents control. From what I can tell, she wants Nav as a lover and needs him as a friend; but they cannot be anything like equals. Not for a very, very long time. As long as she is a ruler and he is not, the most he will be to her is a friend, confidant and sex partner. This is probably enough for Nav right now, as she isn't ready for more from a relationship; but when she finally becomes ready for a full partnership, she won't be able to find that in Celestia.
Fluttershy: Fluttershy did not love Nav. She loved being needed and helping others. She would have dedicated herself to her and fallen in love, but it would have been a long time before she let herself really see what Nav was. She may have then fallen in love with her, but Nav would not have lasted long while being smothered by misdirected feelings.
Chrysalis: No. Just... no.
Twilight: it's been a long time since Twilight was really an option, if she ever really was. But ironically, I think she understands Nav the best. She had a crush, but they actually have a chance to become friends now and could probably be bang buddies comfortably.
Spike: Spike is not ready for a relationship, not with a cynical creature like Nav. But it's undeniable that he has real feelings for her. Heck, he was infatuated with Nav back when he was male, and Spike has shown no inclination of being gay otherwise. This shows that he finds Nav attractive because she's Nav, being female is just a bonus. Spike is also a creature of deep infatuations. But that does not make his feelings less real. An infatuation could also be called a one sided love. It took years of Rarity abusing his feelings before his love for her broke, and I don't see Nav using Spike like that. Spike will be in love with Nav for a very, very long time.
So why do people ship Nav with Spike?
1) He is the only one that genuinely loves her.
2) He is the only one that could have an equal relationship with in the near future. Given their history, Nav would always lead, but this is still by far the most balanced pair available.
What are the things keeping it from happening?
1) Nav does not want to be attracted to a guy.
(This seems to be mostly because he hates being a girl. If he ever accepts this, and that ghost encounter is forcing the issue, then this reason will go away)
2) Spike is too clingy. This is either because Spike is (rightly) insecure about being able to be with Nav or because of his nature. Or both. I suspect both.
My feelings? I think Nav could be perfectly happy with Celestia up until she decided to sacrifice Nav for "the greater good". Which would happen. Soon. Either Discord would do something mean, or Luna would retune and Celestia being happy with the being Luna wanted was bad, or someone convinced the ponies that Nav had to go... You get the point, Nav will never be the top of Celestia's priority list. I think Nav would be happier in the long run with Spike. It would take a bit of grooming to bring him up to where he needs to be, but it would be worth it.
Good grief... I worth a wall of text on shipping... I need a life.
4921985 I stand corrected on those things. I was a bit out of it last night so I didn't quite phrase the whole library thing right. I mainly meant how he always learns of recent world events that involved the mane six and then acts suprused. Even with that I was thinking about the earlier chapters more. I also didint mean any of that in an accusotory or angry manner, I was just wondering.
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Here we go...
The dude is free to speak his mind, if you disagree, don't comment.
And, if Celestia isn't manipulative I'll eat my own shoe, she blackmailed Navarone, tell me, is that something an Authoritative figure would do? She forced him to murder people for her using blackmail or threats to murder him, both of you get your bloody facts straight, Navarone x Celestia makes sense due to Stockholm Syndrome, hell I think that's the sole reason (s)he didn't just murder them all or leave them forever, permanently wearing his ring to make sure that they can't track him.
Oh, great...it's going to be a sex battle to the death...
DEATH BY SNU-SNU!!
Alas, poor Trixie...he screwed her well...or was it she? He/She? Just go with the Flo!...
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Thats cool I didn't know that.
For some reason this part made me cackle for minutes. Bad influence at its best.
"So, can you recommend this fic?"
Ah, no. Not directly, anyway. I'd tell you to go read it, but you didn't hear it from me.
"Why not? Is it badly written?"
Oh no, it's brilliantly written. It's just really fucked up.
Great chapter, liked all the refrences and a good slice of life is always enjoyable, specially considering that Discord is about to mix things up
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this guy has it right, if anyone took a class on psychology nav is suffering from several serious conditions, one being stockholm syndrome: the victim carrys feelings of either pity, love, or understanding of their captors. flo isnt helping these conditions shes simply pushing them to the back of his mind so it doesnt destroy him. the sheer number of problems this guy has mentally would put a full staff of psychologists and attendants on duty 24/7 for just him alone to keep him alive and not comiting suicide. if something ever happened to flo where she was completely removed and he had to deal with it himself there is no possible explanation, save discord interfering, from him simply becoming a shell of a human being.
Sweet Donkey Jesus and Discord, yes! Now we're getting somewhere!! Not to say the last few were boring, but I do so like the violence and carnage Nav is able to bring about.
...I think that makes me a bad person.
Is Nav's real name Fontaine? He says "would you kindly?" A lot these days XD
Is Discord organising his own death? He knows Nav is out for blood and he doesn't seem to care for his own well being and it's already been said that he's tired of living. Is the story going to end with Discord dying extravagantly and Nav becoming Discord? I don't know but that seems to be it like Nav will be Discord and Discord knows it so he'll die to make himself... Or make himself so that he can die... Interesting no? Or just me grasping at straws? XD