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still got comments in the Gdocs
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I don't remove comments in the gdocs. Why would I?
In the middle of re-reading this...
My god, the rewrites are extensive! The first twenty chapters may as well be an entirely new story!
The downside is a few small continuity problems, but I really love the changes, especially that little homage to the deleted chapters.
The biggest downside? It will take me a few more days to get to the latest new material
Good chapter, though it would be nice if they were more frequent. But the author does, what the author does.
The sun's gonna burn out before this story finishes.
4264164 Fitfh.
Just started the chapter and I want to say THAT I TOTALLY FUCKING CALLED IT SMILES AND ICE WTF YEAH
Took me a week...but I sorta did it "falls over keyboard"
One question though....is the real alpha and omega in the verse of this story? pretty curious as to wether or not Discord acknowledges it's existence (if it still exists or makes itself be known).
4264164 Frist?
Huzzah, chapter!
“...it’s that homecoming’s a bitch.”
Heh love the recurring theme here.
Its kinda mysterious and scary what Ava's influence could do next. I like that.
Im wondering how many licks it takes a dragon tongue to get to the centre of a toffee coated Crabapple.
Or if Navarne is going to go riding on the range. Roast Crabapple Pie
Next though, after all the fun of the general Canterlot attack, is heading off to pick up the rest of Flo?
10 quid says Celestial turns Nav down.
Also, woo, new chapter!
4264182 If I keep writing at the standard that I'm forcing myself to, then I'd end up with ~3 million words at this point in the story... Happy happy joy joy.
armor of undead the dragon
4264672 You wrote quid, my mind read squid... I bet 10 squid that Nav will get ink in his face.
Nav always has to say those last couple of words, huh...xD
Too true though.
>And it is likely I would split you in half should I ever forget my vows anyway
wat
>It’s a surprise, but I’m sure you’ll love it!
Oh my~
you know, the ring and key are left, im curious what the bad side of the ring would be when it fails. if it can.
Sweet Celestia. 1 and a half MILLION words.
I think Nav's mind is on its last legs. What with all the traumatic incidences and whatnot.
“My eyes are up here, Dash,” I said.
“I’ve made my choice,” she replied, still looking.
I said that to a girl once. I got slapped. Worth it.
4264164 Iidot
That armor is fucking cursed, just has to be.
Three good reasons; 1. It's black. In a lot of media, Black armor almost always belongs to someone that is cursed, destined to be cursed, or is cursed itself.
2. It came off of what was essentially a necromancer's greater undead. At least some of that shit is still living, 'possessed' by its former owner.
3. As well as being form-fitting, it's more than likely tight enough to be very much like a second skin. Now all Nav needs to do is get his hand cut off in a fight against a legion of demonic entities and learn multiple weapon skill sets.
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Well, it is a 10k+ word chapter that's been proof-read and 'cleaned'... it's always going to be quality over quantity, my friend, as there isn't a way to truly have both (yet) in a manageable amount of time considering the ever present presence of life.
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>that's a bad thing
I am pretty sure the phrase is "if I never see X again, it'll be too soon."
Are big, black tentacle plants in the future? Probably not. Talk about hentai candy!
KBO.
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Possibly, but if it is, I do not think it will affect Nav alone this time. As it sounds like Jak is making more suits, and they mentioned there was enough to outfit the entire crew.
But personally i think it will be a red herring. We have some much bigger potential curses hanging over the head of Nav right now. The Ring which could cause permanent magic immunity (no more magical healing, which Nav often needs, as well as no more flying), not sure what the key will do, but the most evil theory was making Nav ALWAYS tell the truth.
bet that the amor still has a connection to the necromancer I read about in fanfictions
It's like you took the thickest brand of foreshadowing you could find and lathered the entire ending with it.
That was awfully foreboding.
4265256 or make anyone near him always tell the truth
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Ah yes. Why remind yourself of a pain in the ass after all. Now I understand.
Are we ever going to see detailed female Nav sex?
Btw, great chapter and I cannot wait for the next one!
4264940 you forgot reason 4. It is Nav who owns it. It is like Murphy's Law, but worse.
4264189 Yeah! What is he smoking? The comments make the story so much better on Gdocs.
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I doubt that would happen. Not to mention the stones didn't actually curse them, they just had their power drained, it may (though highly unlikely) be possible to recharge them somehow. Whether it's with chaotic magic, pony magic, or hell... why not electricity? We don't know how they work.
The key? It may have a similar effect. It's possible it has a set amount of power and that will fade over time and use, maybe backfire.
The ring... maybe it'll just stop working or have it's effect reversed. It won't be a blocker, but an amplifier instead. That could be a HUGE double edged sword. Faster flying, more powerful spells, etc.. but that would mean that those spells being used on you are more damaging as well...
But whatever, time will tell...
4265447 Nothing bad happens and Nav leaves. XD Trollolololololol!
So, correct me if I'm wrong, wasn't the reason Nav couldn't be the chosen one the fact that he was male?
I haven't read that bit in a while and I don't have the time to do a reread, so I'm not working on entirely accurate assumptions.
Back in Canterlot, hopefully Navarone will make some time to meet up with his favorite immortal guard captain.
My headcanon is that if it relates to science, the terminology doesn't change. I get the pun, but pedofoalia? Really?
God dammit! Implied cliff hangar!
Also, can we have news of crazy Luna-tic?
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Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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Nav can't be the 'Chosen' birdy-kitty because that was in the past, and has pretty much been confirmed to have been impossible for birdy-kitty to be Nav in the Eqypt arc, because Chosen birdy-kitty is dead.
Nav can't die, per Discord's Rules. Unless that's supposed to be whatmustido's twist ending... which I highly doubt.
Then again, I haven't re-read the story yet from the beginning since the re-write. Maybe that's changed?
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Yeah...
If I remember correctly, flying female cat which could see in the dark. So all he's missing now is the cat part but with two more magical artifacts curses to go...
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Split him in half. With his dick. Sexually.
Something terrible is gonna happen something vary, vary, bad. I'd like to through some souls into the beting pool and say he gets kidnapped by luna or some other crazy.
Every time I see an update i get so exited. And after reading this I know the wait was worth it! Keep up the great work
Am I wrong to feel that this song sorta fits Nav and crew?
I looked up the translation of some of the lyrics and it oddly fits to a certain degree.
Well, until the next chapter I guess.