"Hi its me, Ness. i am the slayer of Giygas and a hero in my universe. but after three months since my adventure, was teleported to Equestria... i miss my mom..."
So if you already guessed it, yeah, im making a Earthbound crossover... kinda fitting considering i am a huge earthbound fan. but yeah enjoy this story.
There's also some comedy don't worry. also ness is thirteen when he started his adventure. but for the heck of it, imma make him fourteen.
So there's also gonna be a lot of Fifteen year old Cadence X Ness in this story. if you aren't prepared, then don't read please.
Chapters (3)
Needs a bit of spelling and grammar cleanup, but if you can improve that you might actually have something good here.
Not bad. Will Ness be the only one with PSI or will others learn to use it. Either way I won't mind. I'll still read this.
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He will be teaching it. i'm glad you enjoyed this story!
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Dope! This will be a fun ride.
I like the idea of the story, though I think you should have Ninten in it as well for a twist.
I like this story, although it does feel a little rushed in my opinion. keep up the good work!
Ooooo. I like it
A little bit rushed, but it was a good ride, hope for more chapters, thanks!