Omg thank you guys so much, this made my birthday so fucking special!!!!!! Thank you so much I absolutely loved it! In fact, I loved it so much, I read it 2 times in a row! The characters were amazing and spot on, Alastor was super awesome, Pentious was super awesome, and already you NAILED Ashira! Thank you guys so much once again, hugs and kisses!!!!

“Oh, and I got my microphone back, fancy that!” He said twirling his cane. “I can do the thing again.”

What? He didn't need the Stereo or Speakers for his demonic-powered mic?

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. We had fun writing it.

Could Vinyl supply Alastor with equipment of varioius forms, especially if she is vampire or even lich form here? For Lorraine maybe a fibre whisker radio replacing one of the hairs near her ear that Alastor can trace and patch into over, for protecting his own?

Apart from Pinkie, is there currently any entity on Equestria that can truely wander into Tarterus with total impunity?

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Vampire I get but her as a lich ?
That's first

I happened to be listening to a thematically similar song as I read this. "From Hell with Love" be Beast in Black. That band has a bunch of songs inspired by 80's anime like Fist of the North Star and Berserk.

"I thought I wasn't allowed in? That's the whole reason you're even up here." Lorraine pointed out.

Correction: A Luck Dragon wasn't allowed in because they are creatures of Light and all that. As you are no longer a Luck Dragon there shouldn't be any real problems

They passed by the large fenced off construction site, most of the building proper seemed to be under some kind of massive tarp, probably to keep out the rain.

Why do i get the feeling that's not the main reason

“Well,” John started as he levitated a deviled egg, “if he really leaves us alone, awesome. If he doesn’t… guess it’ll depend on how extreme he decides to be with his attempts at courting you for science purposes.”

He's not trying to court her for "science purposes"... he's trying to court her to piss off Alastor or some other nefarious reason

He looked mostly back to normal. There were a few errant wisps of magic here and there. Also, held in a hoof was a cane. A red cane topped with what looked like an old-timey radio microphone.

Well would you look at that, now you have you're microphone back

“I’ve got everything under control.”

We'll see about that

This might be my inner rage speaking, but can anyone kill Pentious?

It really does seem like anytime I start liming Alastor he goes and does something that makes me hate him again. The whole "Bucksleaf" thing feels very much like an extension of Alastor's original motives or abducting her and generally being q creep what with her now having to medicate herself to avoid consequences.

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Deer experience Heat Cycles. Buckleaf is deer version of the pill. Alastor has nothing to do with it.