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I love how this turned from general randomness shitposting into a full blown, well written, and good story.
I wonder what john's shadow dude is like.
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We kind of cobbled it together and thought of the major story elements along the way.
It's fun.
If Nightmare is a member of the Gods, they can give at least a guide to the current collection, connection and behaviours of the members of the Gods?
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Nightmare is actively avoiding the other gods (besides Solaire) and the other gods won't act against the balance, so the bigger issue is fixing the stuff that's broken before it breaks further. Nightmare's power has also diminished because without people willing to work with her, she has limitations when affecting the physical realm.
Edit- We're trying to keep this as a gradual storyline thing. Don't want to drop everything on readers all at once.
Sorry if I missed the point of your comment, I'm a bit tired.
I don't like havingto repeat questions, but never got an answer last time.
Am I going to need to be familiar with Persona to keep reading this?
Because you keep adding more and more from it, and I'm starting to get left behind on what I feel I should be required to know, but don't, given I have never played any of the games.
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No you don't need to know anything, we're explaining things as we go, gradually.
For example, in Throw Away Your Mask, we established that the "Shadow World" or the realm of the collective unconscious that Persona uses, is the dream realm in this story, you don't even need to know that much to follow along. Luna's plan for eternal night weakened the barrier between realms, monsters from the dream realm are entering the physical realm and attacking ponies. John and Lorraine are really the only ones able to fix that, thus, they'll be trained by Celestia's adopted son to fight monsters made of shadow magic.
As for the Persona characters, I'll be showing their backstory and more of their personality as we go.
If you have any specific questions, feel free to ask.
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As long as you're explaining as you go, it's fine.
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Ok, cool.
I'm writing the persona stuff as persona inspired for the most part but were you able to follow along with the most recent chapter?
Was there anything you'd like me to explain now?
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I think I got the general gist of it.
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Glad to hear it, I honestly thought I didn't write it well enough as my intention was to set up a major story arc that took inspiration from Persona 5 Royal but not a direct copy of it either so readers unfamiliar with Persona could still understand it.
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I appreciate the consideration.
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It's what I do with all my crossovers, mix it MLP to the point where people unfamiliar with the source material can read it without any trouble. I try to do that at any rate.
Like Luna was thinking about herself?
That moon, night and dreamspace is hers?
Kill false gods!
Lorraine is out in this task, then the job falls onto John and help from Solaire, so Nightmare, Alastor and Persona crew
Actually making a Herd feels like a terrible idea. Also the bit with Luna and Nightmare felt lacking. What was done to Luna seemed deliberate and cruel, and all this is just Nightmare not really taking the blame or being sorry for it. That and the l8nk between her and shadows just make it seem like its all her doing.
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About herding, keep reading. We've already established that if a herd was formed, it would go against the norm. As for Luna and the Nightmare, we're working on it. Remember Nightmare is not good, she's a necessary force of creation.
We're not perfect writers, we're writing this for fun and doing our best. Would it kill you to maybe mention stuff you like? It's coming across like you're reading it just to nitpick...