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Sucks to hear about your tv, looking forward for more to come
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Thank you, I should be getting a new TV by next week but I'm not sure if I'll get it before or after our update time, so I wrote bits of Dreams on the PS Vita (my god the eye strain I am never doing that again) and the rest on the PC with Sanguine helping for the scenes featuring John. I was expecting this to be a particularly long short, I was surprised we'd written enough for it to count as a new chapter.
I had fun writing this.
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Sometimes you just have to roll with the punches life throws at you
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Yup, I'm just happy we got something done and had fun doing so.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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:)
An Interesting take on the concept, let us see how it goes. I do like a good rgre, few as they are, so I've got a low bar to fill and a good feeling about this.
If nothing else, it'll be some good fun.
Showing off? At least John isnt Sea Ponie.
Shoo Bee Oh Boy?
As for Alastor misbehaving, I take it every time he sees Pinkie in front of him, he is reminded she is Right Behind Him?
Bruh I’m the same way
I wonder who knows smolbug can become bug-jeera, or would mothra be more fitting?, and why it doesn't come up in conversation more. That sort of ability is very interesting, and likely just as useful in certain fashions.
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We wanted to have fun with this and I hope people have fun reading it.
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Kaiju buggo is interesting but could also be dangerous, it's an idea we do plan on exploring.
Sounds like they need to sit down with Alastor and tell him what they know about the radio demon
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They'll sort things out sooner or later.
Hibestly I think Nightmare is totally in the wrong here. She may mean well, but she certainly isn't anywhere near right. Who cares if Luna was acting in self interest? Everybody does that! Its not like she was hatxhing an evil plot to exploit John and Lorraine, she may have messed up but that doesn't mean her gwtting them involved was a hostile action.
Also, its totally obvious Nightmare is trying to force a harem here. "You're friends and you like him, so its terrible that you aren't screwing him!" That's what it sounds like she's setting up there.
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Can you explain how Nightmare is in the wrong when a ruler was abusing her power for selfish reasons? To the detriment of others.
As for the harem, The Nightmare can see all possible futures, why wouldn't she try to nudge things in a certain direction?
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I'm. not talking about everything Luna has done, specifically just the Stallion Rights movement. Her getting the protagonists involved doesn't seem like it is her exploiting and abusing them, her getting something doesn't make it bad.
Rather it seems to be saying because her intentions weren't utterly selfless they were bad. People alwayz want to get something out of what they do, ot doesn't mean they'll be terrible or mean in doing so (assuming the person in question isn't terrible). Personal benefit and others benefotting aren't aleays mutually exclusive.
Though of course Luna DID rather mess things up (an understatement) but I really don't think she was deliberately trying to be terrible.
Edit: also, Nightmare trying to nudge things in that direction seems like she is acting out the setting tropes, funnily enough.
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Eh, good point. Luna will improve over time, as will The Nightmare.
Also that's the point, not even the gods are exempt from how this world works, they just maintain it. They're more like greek gods, just as flawed as mortals but with a lot more responsibility and and greater consequences should they fuck up. This universe runs on visual novel and anime tropes first and foremost.
Really loved the chapter and the ending was perfect, may have been pushing teen a little but I really liked it, hope you guys have a good day and I look forward to next chapter or short
Edit: not even a minute passed and this comment got a like! :P
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
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Luna improving isn't something I see as likely myself. Nightmare's punishment doesn't look like it has any intention of doing so. Given Luna's motivations her "redeeming" herself would mean abandoning them, which woukd prove completely disastrous for her mental and emotional health. The only lessons to be learned here are harmful ones. This is assuming her motivation is similar to canon, in that she desires love and respect. So yeah, either she humiliates herself and admits she doesn't deserve love, or has a part of her identity withheld from her.
What doesn't really makes sense to me at all is how Nightmare is good and blameless for NMM, but Luna isn't. That and why is Nightmare helping Lorraine at all, but has never seemed benevolent towards Luna at all. The whole NMM thing just seems like the equivalent or hitting a dog with a newspaper because it did something wrong, the dog doesn't understand anything other than someone hurt it. It just gives Luna a reason to distrust Nightmare. Pmus the existence of Nightmare Night as a holiday is a huge middle finger to Luna, making Nightmare's Holy Day into a festival that humiliates Luna.
She may have fucked things up, but Nightmare and Celestia don't really seem like they're helping things at all when what Luna really needs is a damn hig and to be told she has worth.
I get the feeling from Luna that she is absolutely miserable with her destiny but doesn't want to admit it. So instead she's trying to replace happiness with adoration of the masses. I think that's why she flipped out over the species change thing. "I'm happy with my destiny, RIGHT?!?! You should be too!" Cue Lesson Zero face from Moonbutt