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Voxum


I like ponies. Ponies are cute.

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Nerd didn't breath hard enough. Lol game ended

Why did you write this story, if you didn't enjoy it?

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I enjoyed writing this. I just discovered that I'm a tad uncomfortable writing sexual content, is all. Implying it-like in An Innocent Question...-doesn't bother me, but explicitly writing it does seem to.

Love might be a strong way to describe it, but I really did enjoy writing this. It was out of my usual zone, helped me understand what I can do-to some degree-and showed me the kinds of things I have difficulty writing.

All things considered, I'm actually somewhat proud of what I've written, considering how uneasy it made me.

Starry_night, I have faith that if a sequel was made that either lovestruck would let Moondancer live or moon dancer would get revenge for you so unless whoever wrote this decided to make that sequel at least your mare friend got to live/ take revenge for you.

this needs a sequence, I loved it

WOW. ohmygod, THAT WAS AMAZING. The use of words, YOU COULD LITERALLY FEEL THE EMOTION. This was incredibly well written, I LOVE IT!!!

I liked the story, but I hate how you made the mare a cliche yandere.It's just my opinion, but the only thing I hate in hentai is the awkward dialogue, such as:Yeeess, senpai cummed in me!Senpai's cum is in my pussy!I'm so happy!

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You know... until now, it never occurred to me that Love Struck fell into the yandere trope. When I first tried writing this, I wanted to write it from her perspective. It was originally going to be a story about how an innocent love turned twisted and corrupted yet still appeared pure from the eyes of the one afflicted, but I scrapped that because I felt I didn't do the idea justice.

Knowing that and now knowing how it appears to others... I now see yanderes in a bit of a different light. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Bone cracked, snapping instantly. Muscle and flesh tore, twisting into thin strands, before tearing away. A silent scream left his throat, blood being flicked aside in the sharp, spiraling motion, more than a few drops getting into his mouth, before his leg fell limply, blood leaking from the torn skin.

oof 420

"Careful, sweetie!~ I want you in perfect condition for our fuuu-uuun!~"

Quick you have to cut off your penis with a branch so she cant have it.
Here are the instructions: https://youtu.be/VnAdKAsD1UE?list=PLlgi8UznIEF3dXanlxCMxTKAB-9NFXwO5&t=8288

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