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Zelku The Thicc-Hunter


A writer, a role player, but most importantly... a Thicc-Hunter. I am Zelku D Hekazel

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After an incident involving one of their friends Spike finds himself unable to sleep at night anymore not knowing what else to do Twilight sends a letter to test Luna to help.

Editing for this story was done by my friend RwneFolftsune on Discord I hope you all enjoy the story.

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All in all good story💚
Though I'm surprised this didn't have the Fetish tag on it?..

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had to switch it to a t in order to get the fetish tags up I been awhile since I've posted on here thanks for

Editing for this story was done by my friend RwneFolftsune on Discord I hope you all enjoy the story.

He didn’t do a very good job. Only two paragraphs in and I already found a grammatical mistake. As well as a few others after that before the story even transitions to Twilight. And the very first paragraph has a mistake.

Twilight Sparkle is pacing back and forth waiting for a response from Princess Luna after she had sent the letter. When a huge flash of blue magic suddenly pops into the room sending the floor a little bit.

It was here that I had to stop reading in order to post this, because I have no idea what this is supposed to mean. Did it send twilight to the floor? Some books? What?

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