The School of Friendship is about to receive a guest like no other. The unknown brother of Princess Celestia and Luna, Prince Thornhill. After being gone for more than a thousand years, Prince Thornhill has returned and will be staying at Twilight's Castle in Ponyville. But when the prince arrives, the mane six and student six come to find out that Prince Thornhill is far from what they expected.
Needs proof read, some issues with tense and spelling peppered throughout. Not really able to judge the story other wise yet.
Actually it is Queen Novo.
from the stroyidea this could be verry intresting.
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You're right. It is Queen Novo. Don't worry, this whole chapter is going to be revised. I'm hoping to find some good beta readers if you're interested or know someone interested.
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Sorry, but I am not good enough for that, since English is only my second language.
Actually usually I ignor most mistakes, like spelling or grammar, as long as you can understand what is wanted to be said. But names and/or titles of Characters is something I see as to important, then to ignor them.
honestly this fic is not that bad, I really like it
ME GUSTA
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so keep up the good work
good update, more please!
I can't help but imagine he has the voice of Adam Sandler.
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Think more Billy Bob Thornton, close to his Bad Santa roll.
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Fair enough.
they help with the antimatter containment
Welcome to the existential dread club my young yak friend.