Siren Appetites

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Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #1 · Jan 3rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

I think this is the first for that contest.

...Solid start to it all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

sunsetsjournal

sunsetsjournal #2 · Jan 3rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

Bice work, hoping to see more in the future!

JerseyWest

JerseyWest #3 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · 1 ·

Not bad :)
Let’s see how it competes with my Sonata entry :p

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #4 · May 26th, 2020 · · ·

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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Fun seeing their catty attitudes toward each other and everyone else.
-nipples peaked sneakily out the top -- peeked?
-caught a peak -- definitely peek.
-Kind of a shame it cuts off when it does. But oh well, the next chapter/sequel with all three of them sure seems promising.
-Good job of making the non-sex parts sexy.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 91/100
Allure: 89/100
Enticement: 87/100
Immersion: 90/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 446/500
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