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libertydude


Aspiring writer, Steve Magnet disciple

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I mean, it's a yak and an earth pony. As far as roughness goes, it's both guaranteed and guaranteed safe.

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Physically, sure, great.

There's more to it than that though, isn't there? At least if they're well-written characters, rather than just fuckpuppets.

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Shrinky is right. I wrote this story with the idea of deconstructing the usual clopfic routine of "ponies banging just because". The story even clarifies that Yona's not put off by the roughness, but by the persona Sandbar becomes during the actual act. It's all about trying to understand and relate to one's sexual partner, instead of just dehumanizing them as a sack of meat for one's pleasure.

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(Figured I'd post an old meme before the New Twenties were upon us)

I really like the story :) thanks for writing it ^^

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You're welcome! It was very fun to write.

Happy New Years!

Well this was an interesting FemDom story, at least I fetl that the pairing was a bit of a novelty.

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Yeah, I got the prompt from Akataja for the Jinglemas contest, and it was pretty hard to figure out how Starlight and Sandbar would be paired together without going the usual "teacher-student" hookup most stories would go for. Sandbar was always a bit of an enigma to me outside of being an all around decent guy, so I decided to give him a certain flaw that Starlight would need to guide him away from. It was rather unorthodox, but most people seemed to find it interesting enough.

As for the fem-dom, that kind of followed from the general concept of breaking somepony who always tries to control their partner. I purposefully portrayed it as Sandbar getting a taste of his own medicine and understanding what it's like for the bottom to be at the top's whims most of the time. All in all, a very weird venture into clop I don't plan on repeating, but a good experiment in finding a different way to tell an underutilized pairing.

Yikes Starlight, well done.

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Great! Always nice to see somebody enjoy one of my stories (even if it is in a genre I don't usually dabble in).

“And you needed to show your, uh, marehood to do that?!”
“Yep! How do you like it?”
“It’s…nice?” Sandbar said.
“Thanks. I think so too. Not the fanciest gear on the block, but it’ll get the job done.”

I-I beg your pardon? :twilightoops:

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