And Here We Go... Again!!!!!

Time for round 2! Let's fucking gooooooo!

It tickled my brain in a good way to see this pop up to the top of my recently updated list. To see this story get some love after all this time is wonderful to see, and I hope it comes to fruition as you desire.

Good luck to you with jumping back into this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Glad to see this back, whatcha gonna do with the old chapters as you go?

Might as well spring for it if iIhave the choice.

I've had this story marked to read later for a long time, but the fact that it hasn't been finished (or at least updated recently) prevented me from starting it (I didn't want to read another story that was abandoned at the climax)
BUT now that the author is going to rewrite it, I will read the original work both to compare it to the rewrite and to pay respect to the author for coming back

In retrospect the five dollar bill was not with it.

"not worth it" - I assume

I could shoot my shot to ask to go into like, a comic book seething or something

"setting" - unless this guy really is that angry

Happy to see it get picked again. Can't wait for mora :D

And here's a question! How often can we expect an update?

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I am *hoping* to write and publish a chapter about once a week, but no promises, I'm a busy guy these days, sadly <:3

Huh. Alright, gonna have to remember that name. Maybe thank them if and when I make another trip if I can figure out where the customer service booth is around here…

if I really wanna know I guess I can ask the next go round.

There’s always the chance I royally fuck it up.

First, sorry im not an expert on english. Since you are rewriting the story let me dump my complaintsopinion, suffice to say I love the concept of this story. However I have a lot of problems related to Rose himself (this is just an opinion, hell maybe you have some of this flaws to him on purpose idk I only read up to part 1 so I'm okay with being wrong):

1. Rose feels like if I told a chat bot to act like a good person, his responses are dry, wordy and he is so polite that every conversation he has feels impersonal. He doesn't feel real.

2. I understand some of his grivances, but most of the time he is really condescending about pony culture, they are not savages dude, they know what consent means. I swear when he said finally a sensible pony to Zecora I felt so much cringe.

3. Talking about consent, he says that word so much that I feel everybody needs a contract to even say hello to him. (this also correlates to point 1). He is really preachy.

4. How he acted during the whole racism part disgusted me. Mf really thought that inviting Zecora was a good idea after she explained the racism to him, he could have taken it slowly instead of jumping the gun. Also previosuly he acknowledges the importance of communication and he up and leaves Applejack there like a drama queen, even though she tried, do what you preach dumbass. That is not how you fight against racism.

5. This leads to the next point, Applejack is done a disservice in this fic, or every pony for that matter. When they offered to protect Rose on the everfree they mentioned the whole stallion thing again, that made no sense, they were obviously worried about him because they care. She just said that so that our protagonist can have another moment to showcase his impecable moral compass and roll his eyes at it. Also why is Applejack kinda racist? Zecora mentioned that ponies fear the unknown, I'm pretty sure that Applejack was feeling something other than fear when she was being pounded by an alien organic lifeform, I guess a zebra is just too much for her.

6. Talking abouut the everfree, why is he okay on going alone to a place he doesn't know because some magical creature in his head told him, even though everyone told him is dangerous. And somehow the ponies are the one exagerating because he is an independent man, goddamn, how much ego does he have?

I would no have cared this much if the protagonist was not presented as nice, but as it is he is kind of a prick to me. Anyway, excited for the rewrite, hope for more.

Glad to see this story back! Looking forward : )

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thanks bro! glad to be back ^^

From what I can remember of the original version of this chapter, Rose used to be a lot more confused and disorientated in the old version. Since it seems the original chapters are getting fully replaced with the new ones, I can't go to the old chapter to compare them. Personally, I think I prefered the disorientation and stumbling through choices that the old chapter might have implied. Not that it matters too much. This is personal preference though. This chapter rewrite is a lot clearer and more precise with what is happening and also more detailed. This is also from memory since I haven't read the original chapter since I started reading this story.

Rewriting this is also a somewhat risky choice. Writing something new is often more fun than rewriting things down a set path. While I think the old story likely has plenty of things that could be done better, it'll take a lot more determination to redo everything from start to finish where the path ahead has already been layed. Personally, I think doing the rewrite as its own story rather than replacing this one would provide more flexibility. With this current setup, your written chapters are being inserted in with existing chapters, and must rigidly follow the original such that new readers will not get confused upon crossing the threshhold of new to old. Doing the rewrite as its own story would provide you more creative freedom to stray from the original story if you so feel like it. However, the current method is fine if you're only planning to modify subpar existing chapters.

Personally, I don't enjoy reading things I've already read (such as rigid rewrites). It's less interesting when you've already seen how everything happens. As such, I'll likely not read the rewritten chapters until they catch up to where the original left off, unless you plan to deviate significantly or change certain parts at some point in the story.

Anyway, good luck with it all.

Conditions: “Don’t worry about it.” .
Damn when you see something like this you should start to worry.

Damn... Re-reading the re-writing feels odd.

Damn... even I death Corporation have pull on someone life

Hmmmm…so I get to make seven requests about my… reassignment, and at least according to what I am being told, I will not be afflicted by the monkey’s paw. Alright then. Well, let’s start simple. First and most obvious choice. I would like to go wherever it is I end up going with having a full recollection of who I am. And preferably, I would like to skip the whole growing up thing. Childhood is great and all, but I don’t think I could do it again while having the mind of a grown ass adult. Plus…puberty, especially potentially as something aside from a human. Yeah, no thanks. Set me in the equivalent of my early twenties please.

Bad call, you lost opportunities to make friendly ties and have common knowledge, wasted lifetime as well.
Want a example?
My story with a reborn old woman has her learning common sense, have a loving family and learns in school the basic knowledge.
Otherwise the individual is literally retarded in a knowledge point.
Also literally popping into existence is a red flag for any government, welcome to the second Darwin Award award coming for the MC way...

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It gets better, wait until blud realizes he can't read

[Response to Query #4: User 19********99 has received the option of selecting the Silver Tier Custom Reassignment Package. While the previous rung of the Bronze Tier Custom Reassignment Package only allows for the selection of a native entity within the desired plane for reassignment, the Silver Tier Custom Reassignment Package Allows for a Carte Blanche Application of seven general parameter augmentations, granted as effectively as possible and, maintaining the intent of the User to the most applicable, feasible degree. If you would like information on upgrading to the Gold Tier Reassignment Package for your next reassignment, which includes perks such as total physical form customization and default past iteration data retention, and one random Platinum Tier special trait, please indicate interest before continuing to make your requests.]

Reminds me if my Selene story, I customize the crap out if that character.

Well damn, alright then. Not sure how you would go about earning that sort of thing and frankly I don’t think I want to. Gonna let that lie for now. Alright now, that’s two down, five to go. Now for one thing, speaking of supernatural entities I have always kinda wanted to learn how to do magic. Might as well spring for it if I have the choice. I know that'll probably put me square in sight of breaching that advisory, but you win some you lose some. Set me up with some magic stuff, strange computer voice. And make sure I can get really good at it if I wanna. I don’t need the power upfront, the learning is the bit I’m excited about to be honest. I want to learn as much as can be learned!

System support, I like to make a complaint, the system is giving me a warning after I ask for a action without double confirmation.
2/10 point wouldnot recommend use the current in action system!

Well damn, alright then. Not sure how you would go about earning that sort of thing and frankly I don’t think I want to. Gonna let that lie for now. Alright now, that’s two down, five to go. Now for one thing, speaking of supernatural entities I have always kinda wanted to learn how to do magic. Might as well spring for it if I have the choice. I know that'll probably put me square in sight of breaching that advisory, but you win some you lose some. Set me up with some magic stuff, strange computer voice. And make sure I can get really good at it if I wanna. I don’t need the power upfront, the learning is the bit I’m excited about to be honest. I want to learn as much as can be learned!

Yet he refuses:
Common knowledge, general world appropriate education, experience with local flora and fauna.
Most horrible... lose the opportunity to stay snuggly from day one

Can you tell me how to acquire the gold package?

you had me at dank meme's

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That does tend to get a lot of folks >:3

Gonna start reading this now

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Awesome! I hope you like it ^^

Dark Tower Reference!

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YOOOOOO THIS MF SPOTTED THE CROSSOVER WOOOOOO

[Parameter #5 set: Users’ new physical form will range anywhere from the 30th-1st percentile for height and 45th-1st percentile for physical attractiveness for species or variety of said physical form.]

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