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Take my soul, my heart, and body, yes, I give it all to you/And if you still won't accept it, you're gonna regret it

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Silverstream celebrates the first day of the Three Days of Freedom. She really wishes she could celebrate the second day.


This was written for Alaborn as a part of Jinglemas 2019! For more information about Jinglemas, check out our group!

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This was great! Good job incorporating things that clearly must have happened but mixing them in ways I didn't think of. Of course Silverstream would have the same parent problems her brother had, and that she'd have a hard time returning to land given her Storm King fears, and that she'd still need support after the events of "What Lies Beneath". Also nice to see the Three Days of Freedom in a fic.

Everyone was written well, including what I assume was the requested pair of Silverstream and Skystar. It was nice seeing the latter support the former, while still feeling in-character.

Brilliant work all around, from building the royal cousins' relationship to showing just how much Silverstream grew between the two celebrations. Thank you for it.

Also, no one tell Spike Smolder got a much more dignified transformation. And I can only imagine what the Pearl did to some of the others...

"Do not look! Yona hideous!"
"You're gorgeous, Yona."
"Sandbar just saying that. Yona bald."
"You're a beautiful manatee and I'll smash anyone who says otherwise."
"... Sandbar say nicest things."

Oooh, yes! Always happy to see winter celebration fic that's not just "Merry Christmas Happy Hearthswarming, everypony!" That gets tired fast when you don't celebrate Christmas.

Oh wow despite everything that civil stream was such a hyperactive hippogriff and very talkable one she still has some PTSD about what happened to her during the storm Kings invasion of her Homeland and she's still scared but skystar and her friends helped her get through this even though she's still scared she's not alone no more and she can still go around without living in fear this was a pretty nice story

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