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I like sandwiches and coffee. I also write a shit ton of smolcellus fics.

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The Student Six get uncharted powers from what’s probably an unknown realm. Eventually, with all the Chaos being stricken by Cozy Glow, Tirek, and Chrysalis, they think it might be a great time to start learning how to use them.

When the time comes to fight, they come to find out that they might not be the only ones to gain otherworldly abilities.

This is an Avengers crossover. Yona as The Hulk, Silverstream as Thor, Gallus as Hawkeye, Smolder as Spider Man, Ocellus as Iron Man, and Sandbar as Captain America. Also, this fic contains some smolcellus, gallustream, and Yonabar. Yep. Back at it again. So if you don’t like that, sorry. Also, this takes place in season nine, the Ending of The End, except, more hijinks ensue. (Also, the sex in this fic is minor and not explicit)

Villains: Cozy Glow as Mysterio(creating illusions) Tirek as Whiplash(Ivan Vanko) and Chrysalis as Loki

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 41 )

Great job on this first chapter. I loved the group's concern as for why Smolder has gone missing for a week when she started gaining Spider-Man's powers (adhesive claws, web-shooting and super-strength even by dragon standards [as well as the danger sense, though she doesn't know about THAT ONE yet]) and had to learn to control them.

Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are well done in all the right places.

Now, on to the next chapter.

Now, Ocellus gets a suit of powered armor with a chest-mounded battery nicknamed ARI. And Smolder gets her costume too.

Again, very good job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up.

On to the next chapter.

Either Silverstream was really strong or the hammer just chose her.

Or, you know, a combination of BOTH. :-D

All kidding aside, Silverstream's discovering of that hammer and the power of Thor was quite entertaining.

Once again, you did a splendid job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places.

Once more, really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, humor, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I have to admit, I kind of got a few good laughs out of the discussion about CHAD (basically a swear jar with a fancier name, but quite amusing) and Gallus going from trying to discover his new abilities to picking up on his archery skills.

And, again, on to the next chapter.

Once more, some really good work on the action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, it was a big misunderstanding that got even bigger when Yona became even stronger than she already was, but at the cost of being harder to control. At least she has calmed down eventually.

Once more, on to the next chapter.

Once more this was a really emotional chapter. Greatly done. Loved how Smolder reflected on certain things when she found out her wings had to be surgically removed and came to realize what she still had.

Anyway, really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places.

Very definitely looking forward to more of this.

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Thank you so much. Although I did forget about the whole Spidey-Sense thing, I will most definitely be sure to add that in some of the chapter's I've been writing once I get to it. The groups concern for her was something I didn't want to overdo, and I'm REALLY glad it turns out I didn't.


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Yeah. I wanted to take into account Tony's fondness for acronyms and take that to action. Of course, Tony and Ocellus are both very smart in comparison, and so I was imagining that Ocellus could also take in his hobbies and creations, but rename them.


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The idea I used of SIlverstream's interactions with the hammer actually pestered me a lot when I thought about it. I thought, It would be pretty entertaining to see her throw a tantrum because the hammer kept following her. Seen as how the hammer chose Thor when he got it, I thought it would be pretty hilarious to see Silverstream get agitated about how much it was following her and no one else.


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I'm actually really glad to see your thoughts on the CHAD part. I wanted to milk the joke as many times as I could, but I didn't want it to become stale and overused. Glad it didn't yet, but still, I'm going to have to come up with a new gag. :twilightsheepish:
And as for the the Gallus part, I wanted to elaborate more on how his archery skills(and skills in general) were improved and he gained some amazing strength in the process. Sure, he might not have the MOST impacting of powers, but they're still important nonetheless.


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Right so, with this one, I was going for the feeling for Yona to feel abandoned by her friends. I will admit, I did get a little lazy at the end with the battle sequences. The battle was at full throttle, and I didn't really figure out how to properly reign it in. I'm glad I'm kind of the only one who feels like it flopped. Anyway, yeah. In the part where Yona calmed down a little, I wanted to bring in some other things about her. Whenever she's feeling something, she always finds a way to calm down somehow. It's like, that feeling when you're angry, but think about how angry you are, and then how inferior the problems are that you're angry about. That kind of stuff.


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And, last but not least. *huff* So, yeah. This chapter definitely was meant to be an emotional chapter with all the things she was going through. The way I wanted her to reflect was to be regretful for everything she thought she might have caused. I'm glad you noticed the emotion I tried to bring out in this chapter. Some problems I was trying to focus on bringing up a little more instead of carrying a plot device without actually carrying it through. I'm glad that's something I did, however, and someone noticed it.

With that being said, I'm really glad you're enjoying this story so far. The some chapters(or at least for me) are going to be coming out with efficiency, so I hope you're on the lookout!

Ri2

So...where did ARI come from? Did nobody think to ask it?

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No idea why, I dunno. When it comes to magical enigmas, you don't ask questions.

Ri2

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I...think, actually, that's when you WOULD ask.

Ri2

No! Not her wings! This is an outrage! Spike gets wings, but Smolder loses hers?!

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Ha ha ha! I guess that's how the gemstone shatters.

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In general, you're quite welcome all around.

Of course, now we're going to be wondering just how Sandbar is going to react to basically getting peak Earth pony abilities (though, that includes EVERY part of the Earth pony package, including increased skill with plants and animals [since that's the way the Super Soldier Serum works; it enhances EVERY part of the potential natural abilities of the species in question]). I mean, we probably won't be wondering FOR LONG (because that chapter is most likely coming soon), but you get the idea. :-D

Once more, this is some REALLY good stuff. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are wonderfully done in all the right places. Yeah, I really liked Sandbar's going to his friends for help in finding his own abilities after admitting to feeling left out. Ocellus's explanation of the super-serum was great as was the post-tests scene. And I have a feeling Flash Magnus would be a good candidate for teaching Sandbar how to make use of a near-indestructible shield.

Of course, when the bad guys start developing THEIR enhanced abilities, I'd bet Smolder would probably be taunting Cozy about how she is supposed "stealing Trixie's bit."

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Haha! I’ll probably make sure to add the Smolder and Cozy part to one of the chapters. The Flash Magnus part is a really good idea, I’ll make sure to utilize that in the future.

As for the later chapters in the fight sequences, I’m really looking forward to the exchanges between Smolder and Cozy, Seeing in Spiderman: Far From Home, Mysterio uses his illusion powers to seriously jack Peter up.

Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in this latest chapter. I REALLY enjoyed Sandbar finding out, first how hurt Yona was that Smolder didn't forgive her straight away, and THEN the fact that Smolder has to have her wings removed (fortunately, though, the web-slinging and wall-crawling are almost [but not quite] as good as flying). And, yeah, Smolder discovering her danger sense was really good too.

VERY certainly going to be looking forward to more of this.

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Ah! Thank you so much. You have absolutely no idea how much your gratitude for this chapter means to me. At first I felt like I rushed it a little, but I’ll make sure I take more time on the next one. I think.

I also plan to elaborate more on the Spidey-Sense in the later chapters; you haven’t seen the last of it!

Why make Tirek Whiplash? Isn't Tirek the most dangerous of the three baddies in terms of power?

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I don’t know. I thought about making him someone else, I mean, I realize some of the characters roles from marvel assigned were a little unorthodox.

Once again, really good job on this latest chapter. The action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right areas. Yeah, I could see Tirek becoming one of the more tech-based villains since it would give him a way to fight enemies who DON'T get their strength from magic. And the implication that the Young Six got their powers from the bell just like the villains did is also a good one as that would imply that the bell itself acknowledged just how badly Discord messed up and was trying to make up for it by empowering some of the heroes too. Plus, the opening fight between (some of) the Young Six and the Three was well done. And to give grudging credit to Cozy, she got the hang of Mysterio's illusion abilities pretty well. This is going to get worse before it gets better (the situation, NOT the story - the story is really good) but I'm holding on to hope that it WILL get better.

Anyway, very definitely looking forward to more of this.

Again, excellent job on this latest chapter. Once again, the exchanges, action, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked Ocellus getting the word concerning the three villains to Flash Magnus as well as the details concerning Sandbar's new suit. And, yeah, Chrysalis and Ocellus's fight was pretty well done too as was Gallus and Smolder's dialogue when the former spotted the latter after she got so badly injured and most of the group after Smolder swung off despite her injuries.

I'll certainly be looking forward to more of this.

Excellent work on this latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are well done in all the right places. Yeah. The reflection of how serious the situation is on the Young Six's part makes sense, Gallus's reactions to Cozy's illusions was appropriate nerve-wracking and I got a dark humor laugh out of Smolder's reaction to Gallus breaking one of her webs.

VERY certainly going to be looking forward to more of this.

Splendid work on this latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. Yeah, the chat between the Young Six following that battle was properly emotional. And it IS going to get worse before it gets better (though I hold on to hope that it WILL get better).

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

I'm calling discord being bored and decided to give them superpowers to mess with them

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Question if people are getting marvel power's why the buck hasn't smoulder healed yet I mean Spiderman legitimately has had his bones broken to a state they should not be saved and he's shrugged it off and they healed unless there ability's are connected to there emotional States where they have to believe that they can do it on side note can others get in on this because lol my of could legit work as ghost rider or some sorta demon Hunter in marvel lore scratch that he would definitely be more of a John Constantine kinda character though the rider has a healing flame ability damnit i really wanna get in on this but got no clue who would work with him or just keep him as himself sorry for the spam btw

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It's fine, and, I've really been into Marvel, but my hyperactive kid ass just hasn't paid any attention to details lol

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True but also settled if your cool with it as red being a mix between his normal Pegasus self with his demons and of Constantine since yaknow he's got demonic ability's but only when there not summoned into a fight and even then it's not for long plus he can work as a pretty good info dump since unlike the others he wasn't affected by discords magic and can coach them on how there abilities work plus it would be hilarious to pretty much tell them they have been fighting the wrong people apart from smoulder

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Ikr imaging chrysislis face as she has to deal with yona and silver stream as ocellus kicks teriks flank with sandbar and gallus both helping the others when they can seeing as the only way to beat Mysterio is to for smoulder to use her Spidey sense to Dodge incoming attacks and counter them when in a illusion state

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That movie was pretty kickass, not gonna lie. It's where I got the train hit reference from.

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Neat also just saying your going going avangers and Loki on is someling needs the pancake treatment

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Wait what movie I was just going on about cannon lore about Spiderman and how he fights Mysterio

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Lol, also, I was talking about the Spider-man: Far From Home movie where he fights Mysterio. The same one you're talking about.

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I was on about the comics and yaknow the old cartoons

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Oof. I haven't exactly been into the comics; just the movies. I'm more just into novels and fanfiction.

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