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garatheauthor


"Show my head to the people, it is worth seeing." - Georges Danton

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RoMS #1 · Jan 1st, 2020 · · ·

I really enjoyed reading this story. It hits all the right spots of the oviposition and D/s kinks. Eggsactly what I needed!

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I know that, this one Is going in the collection.

Hahahaha I saw a video about MLP anal vore... This story is so bland by comparison ... I am very broken now and I found it because I am being punished by GOD for being a brony . I .. I could not turn away.... It was like the deadlight... So thumps up!!

Hahahaha I saw a video about MLP anal vore... This story is so bland by comparison ... I am very broken now and I found it because I am being punished by GOD for being a brony . I .. I could not turn away.... It was like the deadlight... So thumps up!!

Wonder what it will be like for Twilight giving birth to all those... foals? Changelings? Changeling pony hybrids?

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It would be normal changelings as he would have had to fertilize Twilight's eggs to get a hybrid. All Twilight is doing is keeping them safe and warm so her DNA will not mix with Thorax's DNA.

Hope Twilight doesn't mind being a pony blimp.

Oh hey, I recognize that cover!!! :pinkiegasp:

A pretty recent upload, that one is. Its two versions are one of the few if not the only decent explicit Twilight/Thorax pictures on Derpibooru. Unfortunate, but I'm glad I found it.

You know, I didn't have an erection before reading this. But now...
Goddamn, Gara!

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Egg puns at a moment like this SMDH.

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That is a question best answered by a more bizarre clop author.

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It's what I do :P

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Hey! can't you take a yolk? :trollestia:

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You know, I didn't have an erection before reading this. But now...

Now you have an eggrection.

Nice story! 10/10 great work!

I hope you make a sequel to this, for Starlight and maybe Trixie in the future too.

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Where can I find that art?

Here’s a slightly different take on hosting a bug’s eggs: Bloodchild, a short story by Octavia Butler. This is superb - it won both Hugo and Nebula awards - but be warned, it’s not an easy read. An NSFL rating might be appropriate.

Oviposition isn't my fetish (one of these days I'll proof a story for you that I'm actually into beforehand) but this was still super-hot. The Starlight/twilight dynamic was deliciously erotic and the Thorax/twilight dynamic was adorable and hilarious, which made for a nice combination.

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I know that art. Sending you a PM with link now.

She beamed. “Of course I did! Whose idea do you think it was?”


“Wait? What?!” Thorax yelped.


He blinked and looked at Starlight, who simply shrugged. “What? I’m a good dom, but honestly the best doms are the ones that just sit back and allow their subs to dig themselves into a hole.” She smirked and kissed Twilight on the cheek. “Twilight was going on and on about how she wanted to be crammed full of eggs, and I said that maybe you could help, and well you know how her imagination can get a little out of control at times.”


“Huh,” Thorax mumbled.


“What? Did you think Starlight would just auction me off without my consent?” Twilight asked, cocking a brow.

Haha... ha...


I was pretty worried – deepening pit in my chest worried – that there was some kind of mind break shenanigans going on here. You know, what with Starlight's past... :twilightsheepish:


No offense, Starlight. Please don't kill me.

Twilight shrugged. “Starlight thinks it's important that I do the rounds. You know…” She grinned sheepishly. “In the name of friendship?”


“I’ve dubbed it pussy diplomacy,” Starlight offered, smirking from ear to ear.

She really is a slut...

“She has a point,” Twilight mewed, her voice a raspy whisper amongst the orgasmic series of chirps and squeaks she so eagerly offered.

Did she even need Starlight to reveal this side of herself?


Well, this was an... interesting read. I didn't expect it to be a heavy dom situation. Unexpected submissive Twi is a turn-off for me, though I guess in other circumstances I'd have enjoyed this much more.


Well, that's that.

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Thank you very much.

The last line cracks me up. I'm sometimes disappointed by the writing of comedy in oviposition stories. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Thanks for the laugh, and the reason to shower again.
~ MQC

“Like, three with two zeros?”

MISTAKES WERE MADE

:twilightsheepish: Thorax could act dom all he wants, I'd still be driven to snug him like a plushie. :rainbowlaugh:

I haven't seen the Dom/sub relationship to this extent in a good story for a while. Nice job!

I bet the eldest will be called Leonidas

“Clean my balls, you…” He quickly roved his naughty word bank. “Skank?”

Sigh. Thorax plays the king like someone else already played the ace

Damn, that was hot. Just the perfect amount of setup and kink. And finally a Twirax story that I like.

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