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Just a history loving brony from South Carolina.


Things were going good for Jack he was on the dean's list and he only had a year left before graduation. However, while driving home for Summer vacation he drove into a mysterious light and now he and a sizable chunk of South Carolina have been sent to Equestria and to top it off he's regressed into a 7 year old version of himself. Think of this as Case Closed, but it's an isekai instead of a detective show, oh and with ponies, mustn't forget about the ponies.

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This has piqued my interest! I can't wait for the next chapter!

"Santee National Wildlife Refuge"

*lives in Orangeburg*

Did the Gamecocks win the NCAA Tournament to curse us to hell?!

Comment posted by JackofEquestria deleted February 29th

I'm glad you've liked it so far! This is my first serious attempt at writing a fanfic so I was a little worried it might be crap. It took me a little more than two months to write those chapters because I've only had time to write over the weekends. If I keep writing at this rate I should have another done by the end of March maybe even sooner considering Spring Break is in two weeks.

I drive by Santee Wildlife Refuge whenever I’m going back to school from my parents house in Beaufort. Orangeburg is only about an hour away from where I grew up in Summerville. Small world huh?

Is that a positive response, a negative, response or what?

About the jail time or find

I'm sorry that you have to go through the legal system. I hope everything works out in the end!

This was a great chapter and you should be proud if the story you have made! Even if it takes a little while, I will try to wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

I talked with a lawyer about that. I haven’t been charged with anything so far and he seems to think I probably won’t get any jail time. According to him I will likely be able to just hand over my insurance information, have a few points put on my license. and be able to move on with my life.

When will the next chapter be out I wonder

It depends really I'm possibly in a bit of legal trouble right now and the police so far have been very unhelpful when I ask how much trouble I'm in if any. Other than that I have college and only write on the weekends for the most part. However, I do have an extended spring break do to corona virus so, It could be next week or it could be next month.

Alright! I am glad that this story has a new chapter! I think you did as good a job as anyone could with this story considering the situation you were in legally. I hope everything turns out ok!

Go beyond! PLUS ULTRA!

Thank you. The situation is kind of weird apparently the driver of the other car got a DUI charge.

It's not looking like I am in trouble at the moment. I thought I was going to be charged with a hit in run because I left the scene of the accident without giving out my insurance information or contacting the police (although I did report the accident when I stopped about 15 minutes later).

Yay! A new chapter! Also, when fluttershy asked if Jack knew the way, my first thought was the meme, "do u no da way?"

Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!

Nice job so far. There are some areas where the sentences don't make sence due to the structure of the sentence, but still good nonetheless. :scootangel:

Glad you've been enjoying it! I didn't even know that was a meme.

I have super bad dysgraphia so spelling and grammar can be pretty hard for me sometimes. Thanks for telling me! I'll be sure to skim through my chapters and try to edit out the errors. I'm glad you liked it though.

Then you should be in a LOT of trouble for hit and run. Lucky break.

I know, it certainly wasn't the smartest thing I've ever done. I guess they let me off easy because no one was hurt, I called the police and reported the accident about 20 minutes later, and the other driver was drunk.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

I'm not really sure. Honestly, I just wish people would comment and explain what they dislike about it so I can learn from it.

You didn't know Uganda Knuckles?
You do not know de whey!

Honestly, I stopped paying attention to memes years ago.

I only go for ones that blend into my other interests.
Like Isabelle and the DooM slayer, because I love both series.

When I looked at memes I was mostly into the ones having to do with social sciences such as politics, history, religion, and geography. Back in the day I used to find them to be funny and intelligent. I stopped enjoying them around 2016 because it seemed like the kind of memes I liked had stopped being funny and intelligent and were instead being used exclusively for an agenda I disagreed with. For example, the political memes went from pointing out that we always have to choose between a giant douche and a turd sandwich (which came from South Park if I remember correctly) to Donald Trump is great take that Libtards.
Sorry if that explanation seemed a little long

I actively avoid agenda driven memes.
The fights aren't worth it.
Again, I stick to ones that fold into existing fandom interests of mine.
Uganda Knuckles is still under the sonic umbrella, Bowsette is under Mario, Isabelle and DooM Slayer, Baby Yoda is Star Wars, and so on.

That's a very reasonable way of thinking. Sometimes I wish I hadn't gotten into politics myself, but then I remember that I somewhat enjoy arguing.

“ My faithful student Twilight, why didn't you just say so in the first place? " Spike read as six golden tickets popped out of the letter. “Six tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala!”

In the words of Josh Scorcher, "Okay, Celestia's either a very tough teacher , or a troll."

“How come I don’t get a ticket to the Gala?” Spike wondered before burping up another ticket. “ And one for you Spike ," he read before taking the ticket and running off.

"Troll!" :ajbemused:

I always wondered why she didn't just send 7 tickets to begin with. I guess she just wanted Twilight to learn a friendship lesson, but even then yeah I'd say troll describes her very well in this instance.

Good update, so far this story has my interest.

Glad you liked it, I was worried the academic stuff might end up boring some people.

Once again and have a great chapter

Also do you know of any stories where are human finds sunny town

I've read a few stories where a human comes across Sunny Town, but I can't remember them off the top of my head. I actually plan to use Sunny Town as a minor antagonist group later in my story.

Do you think you could just tell me a few if it isn’t too much trouble and possibly send me a link to the stories

I honestly can't remember the names of the stories I'm thinking of.

Will Fluttershy use the stare on him in future chapters

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