What to go with? Silver Glow?

*Admiral Biscuit wants to know your location*

Great story, though! I always love stories of either Princess undercover.

Well written and smoothly paced! Kudos!

Cute and lovely.

Princesses are ponies, or horses i guess, too.

Down vote.

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Don't want to be that guy, but you know, instead of just commenting "down vote." you might as well explain the reason for a bit of constructive criticism to help the author. Your comment is a tried and true recipe for a flurry of downvotes, in fact.

9988821
Trick is to up vote them just because they've asked for a down vote.

This is a nice story...altho I think it could end up a fun romp if the Princess ended up pregnant, and hadda break the news to her new 'personal' guard

9988782
Commenting 'down vote' is as useless as going into a Pizzeria and saying "pizza sucks!"

9988821
That's a self-fulfilling prophecy I happy to oblige.

Also, this

“O-oh Celestia…”

Irony of situation...
To be honest, in her place I'd be struggling not to laugh

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Just a friendly PSA, if you ever see a Fractured Heart comment, ignore it. Their only contribution to this site is troll comments and generally meanness to all they interact with. It isn’t worth trying to show them the error of their ways because they thrive on making people angry.

9990800
Judging from their bio, that seems very true.

9988821
I do it for the reply's