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“I swear…I swear, Twi…that wasn’t intentional! I wasn’t pranking you…I SWEAR!” Dash said out loud, interspersed with uncontrollable laughter.

Twilight laughed along as well.

“Mom, do you get it?” Wind Sprint whispered.

“Not a clue, Windy.”

Probably shouldn't tell them:rainbowlaugh:!

Twilight quickly apologized to Clear Sky for the outburst, attributing it to something that she simply described as “a misunderstanding.”

“But imagine if that were a prank,” Dash said to Twilight, “That would be the most awesome prank EVER!

And Twilight would've fried your ass:rainbowlaugh:!!!

At Royal Canterlot castle, an important purple dragon cowered in a dark corner, on the verge of losing his mind.

Oh poor Spike...Twilight what have you DONE:applecry::rainbowlaugh:?!?!

I always thought "pedofilly" would fit better.

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Filly can refer to any young female horse, including young adult females. Foalfooler, foalfidder, foalphile, fillyphile, also works. I'm the last person to care about proper terminology so whatever floats yer boat. :applejackunsure:

Huk

Hrmph... Another one of those cheap, innuendo based stories... :ajbemused:

... I mean, FINALLY :trollestia: ! Those things never get old :pinkiecrazy:

Good job, I needed that :raritywink:

Look forward to reading. I hope you don't play with my heart strings like in your Spur fic, though :ajsmug:

Greatest. Idea. All day. Period.

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I hope I tickled them instead~:rainbowlaugh:

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Except pedofoal doesn't make sense. Pedo means "of or relating to children." You're basically calling Dash a child of children, which is a different kind of fetish entirely.

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Thanks! :twilightblush: I appreciate that you all bothered to actually read the story before passing judgment. I wish people wouldn't just downvote before reading, because if they read it they would realize this is NOT porn...but I guess that's the price you pay for a clickbait story. :trollestia:

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Indeed it can, but if you call RD a pedofoal, then you're calling HER a foal, not her, well, victims. (Awful topic) Hence why I though filly would fit better.

On second thought, let's not talk about this.

:rainbowlaugh: This is not what I was expecting

I'm sorry, I just had to read the comments first. I wanted to be absolutely certain what I was about to read didn't contain foalcon. I mean, I don't judge people based on kinks. I think it would be kinda hypocritical coming from a guy who's written fifteen with another one in the works smutty human pregnancy stories!

I appreciate that you all bothered to actually read the story before passing judgment. I wish people wouldn't just downvote before reading, because if they read it they would realize this is NOT porn...but I guess that's the price you pay for a clickbait story.

I wish people wouldn't just downvote before reading

A-fucking-men. :yay: That's the biggest reason I gave this story a shot, and I don't regret it.

Have yerself a like and bookshelf. :pinkiehappy:

Huk

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I think you got hit with the same problems my story faced:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/423161/i-just-dont-know-what-went-wrong

People told me that due to the combination of picture, title, and description, at first glance, the story I linked in that post looks like one of those fetish fics. This was pretty surprising to me because that was not my intention:facehoof:.

And to be honest, when I first glanced at your story, the picture and tags convinced me it was another foalcon porn. Frankly, my first reaction was 'Huh, the author forgot to add Porn tag...' :trollestia:.

Only after you made the post on 'Shameless Self Promotion' forum stating that it's not porn, I gave it a go.

I think that less lewd picture and description, could have helped a lot here :unsuresweetie:

EDIT:

Also, why the Fetish tag?

Well, Rainbow took being accused of being a child molester in stride. XD I expected a more extreme reaction.

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Because there is a mention of several fetishes, even if it is all in poor Twilight's head. :twilightsheepish:

Eh, what's done cannot be undone. I underestimated people's ability to figure out clickbait I guess.

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Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I think I should actually encourage people to read the comments to put themselves at ease.

If anyone out there is reading this, this is not porn. No foals were harmed in the making of this fic. :scootangel:

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I think people just pressed dislike button and didn't read the story because of combination of title and mature rating. I take it people just thought that this is foalcon.

This was hilarious. I especially liked Twilight using the misunderstanding as a revenge prank on Spike at the end there.

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Glad you liked it!

lol margarita night that little reference got me good xD

Twilight suddenly recalled that Spike had pulled a prank on her just yesterday that almost led her to declare war on Yakyakistan (it’s a long story).

Now I wanna read how Twilight fucked up, again with Yakyakistan. You'd think she'd know better by now.

So funny:rainbowlaugh: :trollestia:

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