Enter Random Human! Discover the experience of an Equestria that isn't tailored to let the human win. WHAT COULD GO WRONG!
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Fun concept! I enjoyed the descriptions of Discord's actions, from traveling inside a teapot to watering one of the humans into existence. The fine print in the story description is also funny.
I feel this could stand to be extended into a longer story—Discord is already frustrated at the beginning, but there could be comedic potential in letting that frustration build over a longer period of time, which would also provide the chance to elaborate more about his motivations for doing this. Maybe there could be moments where Discord thinks his plan will succeed, only for his hopes to be dashed by something coming out of left field. The narrative even already lends itself well to a multi-chaptered format: each of the humans could get their own chapter, with some of those chapters being comically short.
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I like your feedback! I wanted to leave it at this for now, so it isn't incomplete, but I can still build on it if I want to.
Just everything is just
Aw man... I didn't get to read that...
Uh... Lyra doesn't live with Octavia...
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NOOOOOOO!! HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SO BLIND!!!
Thank you citizen for reminding me. It will be fixed.