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RainbowThunder99


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Please don't hate on me for not including a dream for Fluttershy or Applejack, I was just being a bit lazy.

Perhaps some other time I'll add dreams for them.:twilightsmile:

-RainbowThunder99

I loved that, i couldnot stop laughing

lol :heart: Y U SO BADASS

That story description... didn't exactly sound right. :rainbowlaugh:

Good story.

The story description could be better worded.......

Lol! I knew things would get even funnier when we got to Pinkie's dream! Ha! :rainbowlaugh:

Short but nice! Would love to see more!

Glad to hear that everypony likes it. Thanks for the kind words. :twilightsmile:

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I didn't want to give much away, so I worded it vaguely.

1106292
Dude! I can't stop laughing at that meme! :rainbowlaugh:

I loved Pinkie's dream!:trollestia:

Pinkie Pie is best troll!

When you get trolled in your dreams, you get trolled for real.

This calls for a celebration!

Likes for everypony!

:yay:

*falls over, dies laughing* :D GLORIOUS. Take my thumb. And my fav. And hell, my track. XD

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Awesome! Now I have 11 fingers!:rainbowlaugh:

I liked it. It was cute. The writing was solid too.

The only thing I didn't love was the dialogue.

>“You are mistaken, I am really in your dream. You see, I have the ability to >enter anypony’s dream, if I should choose to do so.” Luna said.
>“Oh, well, goodbye then, Princess.” Twilight said.

That's a little strange. I mean, it almost looks like Twilight is being rude/dismissive of Celestia. Like, Luna tells Twilight that she can enter dreams, and all Twilight says is "Uh, bye.".

Later on when Celestia confronts Luna on the balcony about entering pony's dreams, it's kinda just... awkward and abrupt. Celestia obviously has some method to know that Luna is entering dreams, and she's turned away too quickly.

Finally, I wasn't sure exactly why Luna was being so mean, and what lesson Celestia taught her... I mean, showing up in the dream is a surprise sure, but does it really teach Luna a lesson? I don't know.

As I said though, other than the dialouge, I really liked it. It was cute. :derpytongue2:

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Thanks for the advice, glad you like it.
With Twilight and Luna, I didn't think about that. :rainbowlaugh: I need to fix that...
With Luna and Celestia, Celestia planned a prank on her sister right there, and left to get it ready. Luna wasn't thinking much about it, since she was so happy at the moment. I'll change that.
And lastly, Luna wasn't really being mean... Let's just call it overpranking... Celestia was teaching her sister not to meddle in dreams.
Really I just like the idea of a Luna/Celestia troll war :twilightsmile:

This can't be good... Pinkie the troll...

Hmm, just missed the 1 year anniversary for this story. I just read it again, as I had forgotten how entertaining it was. Unfortunately, I've pretty much left the fan base, but it leaves warm nostalgic memories. <3 you all!
-RainbowThunder

WHY! WHY CAN'T I FIND MORE FICS LIKE THIS :raritycry:
*Rarity Disaster Mode Engaged*

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