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Parallel lines are lines in a plane that do not meet; that is, two lines in a plane that do not intersect or touch each other at any point, completely in sync but never touching. Two girls, living completely ordinary, completely similar lives, on the very same plane of existence, yet never touching, never meeting and never, ever overlapping. All of that changes one day when Lemon Zest's father's job requires their family to move and with the Friendship Games drawing in, perhaps those lines will very soon meet.

If you are wondering, Lemon Zest has ADHD and Synaesthesia as well as some speech issues

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

Why have I not thought about using these two characters in a story together? Great choice!

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Thanks for reading, by the way! and thanks for that comment :)

Good work here; I like the exploration of Lemon's synaesthesia. Such long paragraphs make getting all the details a little hard though.

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I’ll work on breaking it up little :) thanks for the feedback

This is good stuff. Looking forward to Chapter 4.

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new chap coming out tomorrow :) I’m going overseas for a week so I’m planning to do chap 5 in advance tonight

I don't know if it's because my daughter is autistic but how Lemon is seeing the world in colors and smells has really piqued my interest. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

I know that it's a filler chapter and you might not really like it

Filler chapters are a necessary evil when it comes to writing.

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Thank you so much :) I'm autistic myself so I tend to project a little when I write

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Projecting parts of yourself is a good trait to have when writing. I've done it with some of my stories.

This story goes in tracking, I love "mute Vinyl Scratch" fics!

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