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Fluttershy has a new computer! Rainbow Dash wants to pull a prank and decides to break her in to the cruelties of the Equestri-net in her own way.
[My first one-shot. Minor shipping elements- as a gag]
[Enjoy! I just HAD to write this.]
[No editing or proof-reading done, but did my best]
[Well damn? I got semi famous.]
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holy shit
Oh lawdy that was great. A few minor errors in the writing, but nothing major. Fluttershy's reaction to all the scares was perfect, and her revenge shot?
Oh, Fluttershy, you troll.
Serves her right. I do that to dick with my friends all the time, but not when they're at risk of going into cardiac arrest from fright.
And that is why you don't mess with Fluttershy.
Also, this is awesome.
That was kind of awesome 4.5 out of 5
I enjoyed this.
The fear, the romance, I loved it all.
5 Stars all the way.
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Edit: Well dash did deserved it
Sad part is even if you do get all eight pieces of paper Slenderman will still get you.
payback's a bitch
Haha, I love it
Fluttershy, you magnificent bastard, I read your book! :D
Nice work! I did feel bad for Fluttershy though
. You get a like and favorite from me! 
Moar Need Moar!!!!
My only complain would be that the picture of Fluttershy using the stare on Slendermane doesn't really fit with her reaction to the game, well maybe if anything it also seems that if Rainbow considered pulling a prank with a fake turtle to mean to Fluttershy she wouldn't use this particular game on her. The story itself is pretty good. Be careful of the quiet/nice ones.
Oh Yeah!
Couldn't agree more, although I havent played Slenderman or seen a movie of it... this was great! :D
THere should have been a note saying...GIVE ME TWENTY DOLLARS! This made me laugh so hard. Here take my slender gif. Think of it as FLuttershy's reaction to RD's shenanigans
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When fluttershy crystal don't you just want to hug her?
AWWWW YEEEEEEEEEAH
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Can't wait to read this!!
Nice.
Loved it. Have a thumbs up.
Way too go Fluttershy! Loved the story too.
Cloptube
Great story
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The world works in mysterious ways~
1104696 Well, that and... consider your profile picture/avatar.
This was a fun little read.
Aside from the issues we discussed in the Bronies chat over on dA, the only other ones I found were an instance of Rainbow Dash not being capitalized, in proximity to the word strawberries. Then of course there are the instances where you capitalized a personal pronoun following a quote when it was not actually necessary.
Ex: “Wh-What was that?!” She finally managed to say over her shaking breaths.
In this instance, 'she finally managed to say over her shaking breaths' is dependent on "Wh-what was that!?" in order to operate as a complete sentence.
Instances similar to “Another one!” She gasped. are fine, but it is also dependent on the context of she gasped. If the context is she gasps the words, she doesn't need to be capitalized. If she says her bit, and then gasps separately, however, it is reasonable to capitalize.
It's always the quiet ones.
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Haha! Genius!
Great story!
Who knew that she could actually pull a prank like that.
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That game is pretty crazy. I'm just glad she didn't make it up to 5 pages to where Slendy can litterally grab you and spin you around. THAT would have killed her in fright.
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Rainbow Dash, you are so dead... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
You know, I was TRYING to get some writing done, and you so RUDELY captured my attention with this.
Saw "Fluttershy" and "Slendermane" in the title and was immediately
. Was not disappointed. Thank you for making my day.
Congrats on the featured box.
Cool story, by the way. I think it deserves it.
Edit: its even more priceless the second time through!
Wait... Fluttershy hurled a mannequin from ground-level up through Rainbow Dash's bedroom window? Like, two hundred feet in the air?
Damn...
Hahahahaha!! This was great!
Karma really stinks for Rainbow Dash, but that's what she gets for making Fluttershy play Slender. I love Slender, even though I get scared to death every time. Great story!! 
DO I SENSE RIPPING OFF OF MY FIC WHERE RAINBOW PLAYS SLENDER!?
hes always watching alwayswatchingalwayswatchingneveralonealways seesmewatcheseverymovelike acat stalkingamousewaitstopouncepleasefor theloveofgodjustleavemealone ihaveaguninmyclosetiwontlethimtakemeilldiebeforethatcanhappen
he's here.
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I honestly thought I was the only one to write a character playing this game!
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I still can't believe I made featured!
Thank you so much!!!
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You're always such a great help
I'm so glad you enjoyed it too! I'll keep on improving the best I can!!!
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You are most welcome!!!
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Nah, not a rip off...
A continuation, maybe, but not a rip off.
Of course I haven't read your story, so I can't really tell, but just from the descriptions it doesn't seem like a rip-off.
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Look at story titled "Rainbow Dash's Let's Plays"
Look at Slender chapter
Compare dates
Thankyou for helping my fears
Good, though I haven't played Slender.
mit, now I kinda want to!
And d
And that just WILL NOT end well...
Good story, Flutters' revenge was sweet.
That is all.
Journcy Out.
Flawless execution of RD's heart.
And I mean this in both terms.