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JaydexTheShadowKnight


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I did not expect you to delve into spectrophilia Jay. I am, intrigued by this idea.

Okay, you forced my hand with that video Jay.

Firefly: Pony feathers!

They'll be dancing on air when they meet you,

Dancing on air with glee!

Megan: I doubt they'll be celebrating,

When they see it's only me.

Firefly: They'll do cartwheels in air when they meet you,

Their hopes will start to rise!

Megan: From what they're anticipating,

They're in for a big surprise!

Firefly: They'll be floating, lighter than a cloud!

Megan: They'll be floating, laughing right out loud!

Firefly: The sight of you will send spirits flying,

Megan: One or two may burst out crying!

Firefly: Why can't you believe you're gonna be great?

Megan: But Firefly...

Firefly: Trust me!

Megan, you're a dream come true,

That my friends will think so too,

You're the answer to our every prayer!

Megan: Time will tell if I'll come through,

But just imagine if I do!

Firefly: They'll be dancing...

Megan: Prancing...

Firefly/Megan: Dancing on air!

I blame you for this. :rainbowwild:

Star Catcher's voice had me covered in goosebumps by the way.

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You dropped the r here Jay. It's better than losing the whole word though.

Mistybelle went to place a hoof on his hand, but it passed right through. A pale red glow encompassed her cheeks. “Sorry, I forget we can’t physically touch mortals.”

Actually, they can. It usually requires a lot of effort on their part however. And now I suddenly realize just how many movies and stories actually touch upon this subject.

He wasn’t sure if he was awake or dreaming, but regardless, he felt frightened. There seemed to be a spirit or ghost of some kind in his living room.

Remember: Show, don't tell.

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Neither did I. But after some thought and numerous sources of inspiration, including some art like the cover image, one thing led to another and this story came to life. :raritystarry:

Actually, they can. It usually requires a lot of effort on their part however. And now I suddenly realize just how many movies and stories actually touch upon this subject.

Not all stories unfold in exactly the same way, so just keep that in mind as I tell this one, my friend. :raritywink:

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I knew there was a reason that line didn't read smoothly, but I just couldn't quite put my finger on it. Thanks for the feedback, I was able to make a minor correction to fix that. :twilightsmile:

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one thing let to another and this story came to life. :raritystarry:

It's led actually, and typo aside you've just made a funny, but unintentional pun here Jay.

Came to life indeed, unlife that is. :rainbowlaugh: Yeah, I know, that's worse.

Not all stories unfold in exactly the same way, so just keep that in mind as I tell this one, my friend. :raritywink:

Of this, I am well aware. And I am intensely curious to see it works in the case.

As I've said, I have seen this quite a lot. And it has yet to repeat itself.

(watches video in notes)

So, a pony makes a wish at a waterfall of toxic waste and summons an eldritch entity who can summon and control swarms of insects with her mind. Seems legit.

Fluffernutter, commonly known as a peanut butter and marshmallow sandwich

Oh, so that's what a Fluffernutter is. Okay then.

“Oh, you’re a mare…I’m sure of it, even if only in spirit.”

That pun is both awful, and apropos. You had me making a lot of inarticulate sounds with this one Jay. :rainbowlaugh:

I did not see that coming.

Fluffernutter... Now why does that sound so familiar...?:trixieshiftright:

:facehoof: Of course. That Xfinity commercial with that DJ kid. :rainbowlaugh:

https://www.ispot.tv/ad/dTnh/xfinity-happy-place-prepaid-card

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Fluffernutter is also the name of a little DJ for a TV company commercial, which I mentioned and linked in my first comment, 10026011.

I'm so glad I finally got to this, ahh I love it.

Very good story, a pony ghost is something I did not expect. I hope you update it soon :twilightsmile:.

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The next part is currently editing and almost done. So it should be ready to post very soon. :raritywink:

This is just so beautiful <3

following the flower sister’s guidelines

Must hug Lily pone. :heart:

So amazing (crying on the inside)

Una

This chapter was very dawww inducing. I'm looking forward towards the next chapter.

I have actually never been this invested in a fanfic before <3

If you don't mind me asking, is there any particular reason you chose hickory?
Where hickory is well known for its heating qualities and the flavors it adds during the smoking process it is rarely sought after for fire places.
Light aromatic woods are highly sought after, sassafras and cedar are prime examples. Sugar maple and black cherry are also both good choices as they have a very aesthetically pleasing appearance when stacked.
I suppose there's nothing wrong with burning hickory in a fire place, it just seems like an odd choice.

Sorry to bore you with my expertise in fire wood, no offence intended, love the story keep up the great work! Thumbs up.

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First off, I don't mind you asking and no offence taken. I have little experience with fireplaces and the ideal firewood. So, I Googled info about firewood and found this site that explained about Hickory Firewood. From what I read it sounded like a good idea to use it for the story. So that's why I went with it. :twilightsmile:

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I checked out your source, technically there information isn't wrong... But they have definitely "dressed it up" in order to charge you extra for something you don't technically need. Seriously who in there right mind would pay $999.00 for a half face cord of any kind of wood?

I'd be happy to answer any further wood related questions without bias should the need ever arise, please don't hesitate to ask.

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I'd be happy to answer any further wood related questions without bias should the need ever arise, please don't hesitate to ask.

Thank you. I really appreciate the offer. While I've never done much with fireplaces, I do enjoy writing about them. So, if I have any future firewood questions. I'll be sure to take you up on that. :twilightsmile:

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It has a similar resemblance, but Mistybelle has the appearance of an Earth pony, she lacks wings and a horn. Thanks for sharing, it's a lovely image. :twilightsmile:


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Thank you. :raritywink:

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I hope to. I'm just tied up with some other projects at the moment. I wasn't even sure if anyone really liked this story anymore, especially following the 4th chapter's release.

I wonder if this story will continue

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