Twilight watches a strange object falling from the sky during a meteor shower and goes to investigate the crashsite together with Fluttershy and Spike.
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you made a small mistake, because if they really wanted to check all pegasi, Fluttershy wouldn´t be able to go...
69457 If you take it exact, Fluttershy isn't living in the middle of Ponyville nor Cloudsdale, more at the border of Everfree Forest.
Reference to this map. http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xnr2x_yB2DI/TWbPap17L8I/AAAAAAAABvo/mjSxaQ9OMwU/s1600/1298571641152.jpg
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Point taken ^^
by the way, I liked the story, but it doesn´t look finished...
are you planning to continue it?
69483 Probably. I like to leave it open so I could write a sequel to it if I want to.
Very good for a start. I'm liking this story! However, if I may, can i send you a private message concerning some errors in the story? I didn't want to spam the comments with something like that
If not, that's fine, I just wanted to offer some help. Can't wait to read the rest!
69976 Just send them in. I wrote this story without letting it being proofread, checking how good I am with english.