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When your friend builds a portal there are two things you do: question how he did it, and become a guinea pig. But what happens when the experiment goes awry and you dont end up where you plan? Well you go with it of course.

I don't have an editor to help me so if I screwed up, please tell me and if you want to edit it just contact me. This is my first fic so its a little rough around the edges, so tell me what needs improvement.

*EDIT* Changed to Teen for mild swearing in chapters 4 onward

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 23 )

Good story, you certainly got me hooked! :pinkiehappy:

>2010
>using garry's mod for portals

Lol, Pinkie, "Breaking the fourth wall is my job!":pinkiehappy:

Hmmm will there be a robot called Wheatley anytime soon:trollestia:

Imediate first thought: Nickleback.
I havn't read this, but I am intreuged.
Proceed.

As a (relatively) new writer myself, I enjoy it so far.
Proceed. :trollestia:

Celestia seemed a touch out of character and the backstory a little forced, but I like it. :twilightsmile:

The constant grammar mistakes are killing the mood a bit, and the jump to RainbowXOC was a little early, but I like it. :twilightsmile:

Flying Bathtub T-7.
No longer will I have to choose between bathing and flight.
This, my friend, was classic. :rainbowlaugh:

I'm glad you enjoy Valve games. However, I do object to this chapter a little. First off, guns. Ponies don't have fingers and therfore (save unicorns) can not utilize firearms. Second, Celestia would have done much, if not everything, to quell the unrest or smite it. Aside form that, I'm just going to assume ponies took on some human-like tendancies and technology.

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Sorry about the grammar, I hate bad grammar too, I just need time to fix it.

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It's a form of modified portal gun. The other guns, you're right, I didn't put any continuity in those parts, I will fix it in later stories, Anyway if you're scientist is named after Robert Oppenheimer, he will find a way to modify a portal gun to fit a pony.

Its the Grovling right?

that or the lovley day could be a hobbit reffrence with soemtaying what do you mean?


also are you a 360 gamer
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this version is fore crippled ponies who can't walk

.... Alex what r u doin alex sthap

sfs

I'd say this is beginning to be too Gary Stu-ish to be treated as a comedy, but the next plot twist will probably make him female and thus a Mary Sue. While you were doing okay walking the fine line between parody through over-exemplification of the trope and actual implementation thereof, you're beginning to waver. It's fun to watch ponies play with portals, though.

Oh my god, this was so bad! I really should rewrite this :P

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