Great job so far, can't wait to see more.

nice work

This is nice. Can't wait for more

good work you two cant wait for the next chapter

Good job so far keep it up

A interesting start, and as I have expected from Spoiled Rich, Although she still the snobbish type, I wonder how long till that changed around. Overall, I can see how the OC have use his past experience to handle the situation, a good plot work for the fanfic. Lastly, the boy's positive and innocent mood does even out the bad too, Nice work and we see how the next chapter is going to work out.

Eh, I personally wouldn't want anything to do with a stuck-up, self-important bitch; I'd likely try to remotely poison her, because beings like her are ugly smears on their species' name, whether they're human, pony, or anything else.

Or, y'know, magical brainwashing and attitude adjustment; whichever's easier.

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You uh, might have some problems to work out, because that’s a... fairly concerning point of view. Yeesh...

This is a perfect start good job you two

Solo I can't wait for part too I wonder how he gets the girl with the husband still around hmmm maybe the three will be a thing or a brake up with them ?

Any news about ur friend in the hospital I'm holding he's doing better ?

Hopeing