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Ok I can get on this
10051046
Thanks. Hopefully should have the next chapter out soon
I'll follow for now. Let's see if it sticks.
Man, I remember when Gary Stu stories were shunned for the shallow pools of wish-fulfillment that they were.
Good times...
10051239
Fair point. Granted there is an actual plot I have and hopefully in the next few chapters you'll see that he isn't overpowered in a real sense until much further down the line. However you have your opinion and I respect it. Thank you for at least reading the chapter before making it though.
10051254I mean, I was referring to the whole “Harley Kerlain was a student living his life to the fullest, having a good job with excellent pay and benefits, studying and learning everything he could get his hands on and in general understanding it all” thing, but okay.
10051261
Ah then I do truly apologize for jumping to conclusions. I misunderstood what you had been talking about
Problem being, too much in too little. You spent the entire chapter with the merchant and then over killed the whole thing with the addition of another crossover power. The phone was alright, but the Gamer? That's ligitimately the most overpowered thing in Webtoon existence, mar Mori Jin The Monkey King and Zero The First Hero.
There's no such thing as excessive force!! Only varying degrees of overkill!!
10051787
You make a good point however I have plans concerning it as Harley has never really Gamed before as he was usually too busy to study. Hell the main Reason he knows about DMC is due to Sean
10051876
He doesn't need to know any thing. Last time I checked 'The Gamer' ability comes with a small tutorial.
It's not the plans j have a problem with, it's the ability itself.
Dante is already a world buster threat.
The Gamer is at least Country buster an di am quite sure that if we look back to the Webtoon it has not only the potential, but likely will transcend that sometime in the future.
I'm worried about Power balance. Can't have conflict if the Mc's too powerful.
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10052442
You make a fair point. I sent you a message to try and explain about it if you wouldn't mind. I want to get some opinions from someone who could help me make this story better.
Any news?
10087227
Next chapter is almost done. Been fighting writers block hard for each word.
10087446
Good to hear.
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10410283
Lets just say this motherfucker came back the long way round.
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i'll say 😆
10410283
He went through history.
The HARD way.
Quite obvious what happened, to be honest. Celly gave him one way ticket to a thousand years trip and he had to get back on his feet.
I'd like to see more of this story, but I hope it will be updated a bit more often than a chapter in a few months.
Seriously! WTF is Celestia's problem!!!??? If it's ANOTHER DAMN "Celestia hates the Displaced Protagonist for NO DAMN or STUPID REASONS" Trope that I read in MANY "Human in Equestria/ Displaced Stories" in this Fiction Site!
I'm about to use Gold Experience Requiem in LV 9,001 ( JOJO Bizarre Adventure) on her Stupid Sun Bitch Ass! And instead of the Original 7 Page Muda. I use 700,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ( 700 Decillion 10^33 ) Pages of WHOOP ASS on Celestia!
This story is interesting can't wait to see what you do next keep up the good work
TANKED.
10411881
Thank you for letting me know. Its been changed
10410378
Considering she likely sent him back in time there's is distinct possibility that she "hates" him for a reason. Like, for example, he found her in the past and gave royal ass whooping of her life. Multiple times. And then disappeared without an explanation to his rude behavior even thought he did it for sending him devil knows where. So, after thousands of years she encounter him again and think "Oh, shit! Not again! No idea how he got through time here, but lets send him back ASAP!" Basically, a stable time loop. Nobody know how they come to be, yet they happen almost all the time when time travel is involved. In some cases they even revolve around a macguffin which ends up sent back in time to the point where loop started and exists purely within a loop. At least there wasn't such a bizarre item involved this time.
I am highly interested...
Did Dante just get sent through time?
without being turned to stone like 95% of his buddies?
tis quite the enigma to unreveal I can not wait for the next chapter...
Really I can not wait please release the next chapter yesterday..
yours sincerly
J
Will this continue?
Really wished Spike didn't miss out on what happened though..