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I'm not gonna lie, never really cared for the original, always felt like you killed Twilight off really badly/boringly. And while it's certainly better done this time around, I still didn't like it, but I think it's just me being such a Twilight fanboy, that I usually don't like seeing her die anyway. But overall, the story isn't bad, certainly improved from the previous version.
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Thank you for your honest opinion, I wouldn't have asked for it any other way.
I know the idea of killing off any of the main characters isn't exactly a popular thing, but hey if Cupcakes can do it, what the heck right? lol
9969743
Not wrong at all, my guy. I'm all for other characters dying, but i'm too much of a Twilight fanboy to accept her death usually.
I think a link is missing in the author notes.
9973937
Gah! I shall be correcting that the next time i get on my laptop, currently I'm drunning errands lol.
9973937
Link has been added/fixed!
This was stark and beautiful! I love the pairing of Rarity and her little sister, Sweetie Belle. The story you started out with was like something out of the Brothers Grimm (or Hans Christian Andersen) that nearly brought me to tears. Then you twisted things further by having the two sisters (and Twilight) meeting a bad end because of an infected/zombie invasion.
Good work.
9977191
Thank you so much!
This was actually sweet, the love Rarity has and what she did shows her love for her family. I liked how she took care of Twilight, but it was hard to envision because it was so briefly described and it feels like Twilight was teleported and brained at the same time...
Good work.
9999289
Thank you!