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So not gonna have the bad guy finish the sentence?
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What sentence?
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Once they do get his power, what? Villains usually finish that sentence before the evil laughter.
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Thats for the readers to try and guess, think about it, an couple of unknown villains wants the power of One For All, for what reason? Who are they? Are they from Equestria or from the world of My Hero Academia?
Regarding that last question, my answer is "yes". Or for all we know they're basically an expy for MHA villains. I know I'm doing a lot of those... But it's quite clear what they'd want. They'd wanna take over Equestria and/or kill the Sisters (and maybe the Mane 6). I mean what else would villains use a power like One For All for?
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And it's those types of questions that readers need answering, like movie makers who make movies with cliffhangers, it just leaves the audience wanting answers, making them want watch, or in this case read more,
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Get the picture? If not, totally understand, not very good explaing mystery, if you were to notice in any of my stories, not one has any mystery in it,
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Meh. I personally don't see the point when it's so obvious. Also, small piece of advice, have thoughts be in italics. Much easier to tell they're thoughts then instead of only using apostrophes.
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K
This is good I want to see more
Dude I would love to have more of this and story's that are like this with all might
What inspired you to make this fanfic?
To Tell the truth I thought you would be using heathy almight oh please let there be a way for you to make almight in his prime
I hope there's a way to heal Fred.