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WARNING: THIS STORY HAS BEEN DEEMED AN OLD SHAME. IT DOES NOT REFLECT THE AUTHOR'S CURRENT WORK, AND IN FACT SUCKS ASS. FOR PRESERVATION PURPOSES IT WILL REMAIN.

Twilight foils Chrysalis's plan yet again, and there is absolutely nothing more to this story.

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"Kismesis"
"Kismesissitude"

Is that a Homestuck reference. :derpytongue2:

Don't you mean Kismit?

When I read the title, I thought: Won't be the last time

Kind of reminds me of the ending I had been expecting out of Naruto, which was that Madara’s plan was to use the Infinite Tsukuyomi to create a world in which he could fight Hashirama forever...and that’s it, that was his grand plan, his goal, the thing he’d been working centuries towards. He just loved fighting Hashirama so much that he never wanted to stop.

9963739
It would have been better than the ending we did get...goddamnit now that I think about it It's like Kaguya was introduced just to help hype boruto's plot line.

Boruto ruined the end of Naruto.

9963764
Out of all the discourse I expected in the comments of this story, Naruto was not one of them.

9963781
No one expects ninjas.

That's because they're ninjas which means the unexpected is just another element to plan for.

I honestly feel obligated to post this for some strange weird reason:
You KNEW this was coming YOU ALL KNEW

9963802
Thanks, I think.

damn you
my one weakness
chrysalight

9963810
You are most certainly welcome aura, it was bound to happen sooner or later

9963815
I dont think anyone's ever shortened my handle that way. Def pleased.

I think that it would make sense that changeling would perceive romance in a black way (yes I'm using homestuck terms deal with it *puts on ironic pointy anime shades*) conserding that they feed of of love in the traditional sence.

Homestuck? In MY 2019? It's more likely than you'd think.

9963844
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9963827
Most certainly agree with ya dude. Plus it would be a good excuse to explain them hate fucking. :P

9963875
I am not writing that.

9963880
I know I'm just saying is all. :P

9963823
It just seemed most obvious...anyways I’d like to see more of this sometime!

This is the perfect Chrylight.

9964108
Eh. My bio really says it all. This was really just a side project while I work on a bigger fic that I hope is gonna be better than this trash.

9964262
Im glad you think so.

9964612
Doubt it. This really was not the fic i expected to blow up, even if that only means 34 likes, considering how bad this story was compared to my others upon looking back at it. I really just wrote this in an afternoon to procrastinate. I appreciate the support anyway.

9964612
ok, maybe. IF i still feel like procrastinating on that lyra fic.

9963823
I thought this was fairly well written, just a bit hastily written. I’ll check your other work later

9964940
anyways, you have earned yourself a new follower!

Oh this is great. I love the enemy thing with Twilight and Chrysalis. If I were Twilight, I'd consider her my worst enemy for turning my BBBFF and friends against me. Pretty funny the way they have a little romance in there too.

Love makes fools of us all...though I admit that most value their limbs a bit more.

I can't help it! She's just so powerful- So many fools have dared to call themselves my equal, but she can actually back up that claim!

:trixieshiftright:: "Just like me, the Great and Powerful Trixie!"
:twilightblush:: "Well..."
Edit: When I wrote this I thought it would be Twilight talking. I'll leave it here anyway.

"I've invited her over again for next week. Feel free to abandon the hive that day to save your skin from our rampage. Oh, I can't wait!"

Thorax: "Don't worry, I already have an idea where to go. And it will probably not end in an revolution throwing you out."


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

9965532
Eh. Her leg was fine.

Heh, reminds me of another fic where Chrysalis mistakes Twilight fighting (and foiling whatever scheme she cooked up) for "aggressive eloping", resulting in the Queen agreeing to Twilight's apparent marriage proposal by defeating her in combat (I think the idea was paraphrased from Klingon marriage rites). The story then continues with Twilight more or less politically railroaded into actually marrying Chrysalis with the hopes she might be able to redeem the Queen (Ha! Like that'll happen), while Chrysalis works to "woo" Twilight in her own way while having almost no clue what a pony really likes. It's an educational process for both... (Many changeling drones are abused for the comedy)

9967140
Changeling courtship rituals was a really cute story

Not gonna lie, the turn was so abrupt I had to reread it a couple times. But it totally worked. Honestly I kinda want more. Like... What is that lunch gonna look like. Does Twilight get her leg reattached. Will she take a trophy from Chrysalis's body. I've fallen hard for this ship before, and for the same sort of premises, but never quite this bluntly done.
Yeah, I talked myself into it. Liked, faved. And you'll get a follow with even a small hint at a sequel.

9969694
why do people like this piece of trash I'm going to have to write a sequel at this point

9969697
Sorry. No accounting for taste right. Maybe stop being a good writer and people will stop expecting good stories from you I guess. No, that probably won't work either, fans are crazy like that.:rainbowlaugh: If you do write a sequel I guess I'll at least promise to not fan boy to much at it. I know how it feels to have people praise the work you hate. Not here though, more back in college.

9963802
That is going to throw an odd wrench into my YouTube video algorithm.
..... Worth it, and I don't even know what the frick that series is.

9965532
Darn you, you beat me again.
And it all really depends. I'd forgive my wife if she cut off a limb. Once and only once though. Ok maybe twice. But I've also been married to her for a while now so there's more investment. Before the first date... It might just depend on how hot they are. Not sure, it's been a long time since I've been single.

9969730
Perhaps I value limbs more than most then.

9969749
Probably not, I'm a little more nihilistic then most. Plus, why would Twilight need limbs. She has magic.

9969754
Yeah I’d trade a limb for magic.

9969789
Doesn't really seem my cup of tea. I mostly liked the sentiment of the song. How can you love someone if you've never thought about killing them at some point. :rainbowlaugh:

9969843
Just figured to give you some context lol

9969843
Shame. It's one of the best internet pieces of fiction in my opinion, I even have a shirt based on the one a main character wears.

9969702
If my other stories are worth anything, the answers no.

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