Rarity waits near the alter for one of the two brides of the wedding. With Big Mac escorting Applejack down the aisle Rarity can't help as her mind wanders back to earlier times.
Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
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Before reading: Don't break my heart, don't break my heart you asshole...
After reading: NOT WHAT I WAS EXPECTING BUT FUCK YOU ANYWAY MY HEART AAAAAGGGGHHHH
On a more serious note, good job! I thought before reading that it would have been some delusion and AJ would be dead or something. The grammar is good, the pacing is nice, if quick, and the subject is pretty believable. Good job in all. 8/10
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Yeah I've always been one more on a story side of things. I'm not much on pros for the sake of pros (which is why I'll never be a real author :D.)
But in return for your silliness take mine!
ONLY AN 8/10!? *Deletes comment. Blocks!*
Acquiesce
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Absolutely not, it was totally related to water! <.< >.> * Cough.*
Man, you have a thing for people having a terrible time at weddings.
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Hehe, that occurred to me! But it fits.
You know what? Well done. An astounding twist, and I didn't see it coming at all. Sure, I had a guess in the bag, but I was dead wrong. I feel awful for Rarity, but I'm also proud of her. You did thing 120% right.
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I'm curious, what was your guess?
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Ah, my guess had been that it would be able AJ's missing parents, actually. That Rarity would feel bad for her, that it might to some extent lessen the moment.
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Awww. That's cute. ^.^
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But this story was brilliant.
The turn around on that was well executed and fairly will timed. That's the kind of double take that breaks necks right there.
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Behold my evilness!
Back to back heart crushers today, what the hell! I'm choosing poorly.