Twilight Sparkle didn't consider what might happen when she used an "Object Possession" spell to check on her student. Now she has to live with the consequences. Forever.
For years, Princess Celestia faced the fact of Sunset Shimmer without a mother, and Sunset without a family. Luna decides it's time for that to change.
Starlight Glimmer seems to be happy with her new life so far, However some things appear to be perfect on the outside are not so good on the inside. Gossip, Rumors,ponies giving her hateful looks. Then her thoughts start to get to her.
Not even twenty-four hours and Starlight Glimmer has already been forgiven for her acts. Even though she and Twilight have become friends, the unicorn has not told the princess her true pain of her past and why she truly hated cutie marks.
For a first story, you nailed it. Not perfectly, but way more than a lot do the first time. The crux of the story though wasnt a shock.
Starlight's tag kinda gave it away for me. But I love it anyway.
this story is definitely getting an upvote and a favorite from me
You know what they say. It's easier to ask for forgiveness then permission.
Very nice