And how cruel she should make her inevitable revenge.

It's spelled "sudden yet inevitable betrayal" you dork.

I SAY WE CALL IT YOUR GRAVE!

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Mine is an evil laugh

God damn. And I thought that Trixie would just this as an excuse for more pranks xD

Oh I know what shall be her revenge at the end. Demanding that Sparkle makes good on what she wrote, as the dom and then as the sub so Trixie can show her how it's done.

Any couple that comes out of that is completely unrelated to how the books could stoke a fire Trixie never knew could be so hot, obviously

Twilight, you crazy fothermucker

You know what my revenge would be?

Getting it published.

All of it.

Even the ones about me.

Then convincing Celestia that our Lady of Purple Pussy needs a godamn harem.

Or Luna, which ever one is willing to release the terrible trio.

Then watch the chaos ensue as two of equestria's greatest enemies whore twilight for freedom, while a third realises that twilight doesn't want to be whored.

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Yes. Or better yet, get it all published and dedicated to Celestia, as well as sending her copies. Imagine her reaction to it all, somewhere between "WTF TWILIGHT" and "Huh, some of this is kinda hot." Then she gets to the stuff written about her - I refuse to believe Twi hasn't fantasized at all - and Celestia's reaction (and twi's punishment) is that she wants her to put her money where her mouth is.
It'd be a funny spinoff if nothing else.

May put any particular kinks or warnings in the A/N of each chapter, unless people would rather be surprised?

Oh, and now that I've gotten around to reading the chapter: you are required by law to inform any participants in sex stuff of what they're getting themselves into. Similar moral principles apply here, although it mostly goes towards making the prudes look like idiots for expecting anything else from your story.

Pretty good without much detail keep it up

This is amazing.
The idea is...something I wish I had thought of, honestly.

Her reading the story, and then having her own thoughts about it. It's genius!

And it makes the hotness even hotter.

You do need to add the Non-Con tag to this story, though. Because the events are definitely not consentual.

Nice, leave the non con or make it role play and this would be a great book