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Here is to being cautious, I wonder if the sending of sweets is meant as proof for Twilight test that if they are really using illegal additives in heir pastries. I would wonder how this will start turning wrong for them, before they can finish paying their debts to ease off. I wonder how they deal with seeing those cookies to foals?
That's a spelling error, I presume
Also "dispite tired". Did you mean 'Despite being tired?' Not really an error it just gave me pause.
But otherwise this was a good chapter! A bit short, but that's because I enjoy this story so much! I'm excited to see what Twilight and the others think of everything (and what the effects of the sugar will do to them).
Hi all, not had any inspiration this week for anything good and I'd rather leave it a week and write something better than something bad, hope you understand!