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Chrysalis is released from her stone prison to be put under hoves of Starlight Glimmer for reformation. She is not particularly happy with it.

It begins several weeks after season nine finale.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 10 )

I’m just so tired of this endless trail of Chrysalis reformation fics...

Heck yeah more Starlight reforming villain fics.

Looks interesting so far, but there are a lot of Grammar errors. I've seen a few recurring instances where quotation marks have commas/periods on the end or are completely missing, and a few misused words, among other things. A few too many to list and point out all at once, but something a good proofreading or two could possibly fix.

But it's your first story, so I'm not judging, just something to look out for in the future!

9971457
Thanks for the comment. I am very well every that I am seriously lacking Grammar control in my writing skills. I am hoping that is something I will get better with more practice. I will try a better job at checking quotation marks for now.

I am glad that you find it at least interesting. I guess that counts for something.

9960828
It's the FotM, plus pretty fertile ground.

As for the story itself, I'll have to say that it's hurting pretty badly for a proofread and grammar pass, but other than that, it's a fun read. Most of the reform fics tend to feature Twilight, and Starlight's sass and not-taking-your-crap attitude is a reliable source of amusement.

9987473
Yeah, I suck at grammar checking. If I fail again about it in chapter 3 then I guess I will ask someone for proofreading.

Otherwise, I like that you find it funny. I pick Starlight as the main character precisely because of her not-taking-your-crap attitude. I just hope I am getting her right.

"get food" Starlight you must be joking...

Gotta work off that pride naturally.

10121809
Now that I think about it, it sounds kinda weird :D

10150740
Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

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