Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
Though her friends have always appreciated her Fluttershy can't help but think she finally has gotten the recognition she deserves on her coronation day.
Last-minute second entry for Contest Imposing Sovereigns II Once And Future. Fluttershy Coronation. Hope you enjoy it!
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That took a turn I didn't quite expect at the end! I think I like it, though--that's a nice way to have the bulk of the story be a dream but not feel entirely inconsequential.
Extreme plot twist Fluttershy is just very very high
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Yay! I originally had the idea of Rarity being jealous but Rarity was taken so I gave it to Fluttershy. Only Fluttershy's doesn't just want it because she wants to be a princess like Rarity would've.
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Hehe.
Treehugger opens the box to reveal a small flower pin. "Woah... Man... I like... Gave Fluttershy the wrong present..."
Bigger plot twist everything after rainbow banged on the door is a hallucination because queen Fluttershy got so out of breath and light headed from saying all those names she passed out or she she hung out with tree hugger and smoked a Doobie to take the edge off at her coronation she smoked bad weed and she passed out or a mix of both of your feeling creative enough to think of a way for it to happen
Dude I was writing my comment before I even read yours we are way too similar i think i need to leave
Druid Queen Fluttershy?
Fluttershy would have made a good princess 👑
I almost wish there was a sequel
Good job 👏
I knew what to expect. The hint's right there in the title. This is an excellent beginning, but only the start of one. How long has Fluttershy's jealousy brewed like this? How long has she dreamed of being the queen who unites nature and civilization? How long until she asks Discord to help her realize that dream, no matter the cost?
... Okay, the Council of Friendship should keep that last one from happening. She's effectively ruling the country now; she just doesn't get a crown.
In all, this is the seed of something so much greater... though given how you signed up for it a few hours for the deadline, I can't exactly expect War & Peace.
Still, I do hope you expand on this. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.
Man, that ending definitely sucker-punched me! I had so many questions as I was reading: What exactly did Fluttershy do to stop the three villains? And could it really have been so amazing that Celestia and Luna switched gears at the last minute to crown her instead of Twilight? How did all of these alliances get formed so quickly? And so on, and so on.
Needless to say, everything became clear at the end. Definitely a fascinating seed for a story, but unfortunately it's really only the beginning of a greater tale. I'd love to see what happens next, if you ever plan on expanding on the concept! At any rate, thanks for writing.
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^.^
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Hehe, well expanding on it would kind of ruin the last line! Or I could use this as a motivation to try and get you to run another contest... :D (Because getting me to write another story is totally going to be what gets you to host another contest. *Sarcasm* :D)
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Man, folks want more. Not gonna lie, I'm a little surprised.
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this is good, fluttershy deserves this.
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I kinda wish there was a sequel or something
Have a nice day
Hehe. You really want one apparently.
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Best Pony gets upgraded to Best Princess, what's not to love about the idea?
Do you have a part 2 ?
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I do not. Don't know where I'd go with it. :D
Huh, that was interesting. Never pegged Flutters as wanting to be a princess.