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Queen Twilight Sparkle has ruled Equestria for over ten thousand years. Equestria now face a plague, killing everything that breathes; this may be the end of an entire race, if not all life. The queen's student has come to seek advice and help concerning their home's fate.
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Damn, Twilight turned into an emtionless bitch queen in 10,000 years. I love the story. But it's hard not to want to slap her silly for being so cold.
I seriously doubt even Celestia and Luna were ever this bad.
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I understand the feeling haha! I tried to imagine how Twilight would be like after so many years of losing her loved ones, and having to fight for Equestria's sake. Then again, it's not the only outcome I see, but we'll never know what the real one would have been like. Anyway, I am glad you liked the story! Thanks!
While I agree that Twilight was a little cold I still think it was a very realistic portrayal of her character. Ten thousand years? I’m surprised she still has the strength to keep going despite everything she has had to endure. Her being so calm and indifferent yet also humble and determined to do everything in her power to save as many as she can while also giving much needed hope and support to her subjects. Truly another masterpiece of a story!
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Thank you! I've never expected someone to say this about one of my stories!
This is a murder attempt on the english language.
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Um, I know it's far from perfect, but I really don't believe it's that bad. I've already seen worse. I'm still improving and the issues I usually have are just some run-on sentences.
Because It's a natural order of Good and Evil, Light and Darkness. You can't rid of darkness because its half of everything. One cannot exist without the other.
They're are examples other than Kingdom Hearts that show balance.
The Tiger Talisman from Jackie Chan Adventures
Blazing Team
That's what I got, can someone else think of a example for balance between good and evil
Okay the idea of it being so far in Equestria's future that these two are believed to be myths is actually terrifying
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The title itself is a murder attempt on proper grammar. It should read "In Ten Thousand Years". And you did the same thing in the description. It's ten thousand years. It's never a good sign for the story itself if you have those blindingly obvious mistakes.
I missed them the first time I read this. Not this time.
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Alright, it's fixed, no need to react like that. If adding an "s" is a murder attempt, I don't want to know what the worst mistakes are supposed to be.
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I'm late, but almost the entirety of Star Wars is pretty much an example of this.