• Published 10th Nov 2019
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The Dusk of Troubled Views - CartoonopolisAdventures

In this sequel to The Dawn of a New Mission, Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow question the trust of everypony a day after reforming. But when they are banished to an unknown world, the fate of Equestria relies on them... and three bipedal creatures.

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Chapter 17: Escape and Trucks

"Hey guys," I said, first looking at Cozy, and then Chrysalis and Tirek.

"Leo?!?!" Chrysalis said, still in suprised shock. She immediatly regained composure and cleared her throat.

"And let me guess..." she resumed. She pointed her hoof at Sam, who was still untying the wire.

"That is really Sam..."

Sam lifted his hand and said, "Yo," to confirm.

She then moved her hoof to Josh, who was also undoing the wire.

"And that is Josh."

Josh looked at Chrysalis and nodded.

"How did you guys get here so quick and easy?" asked Tirek.

I told them about everything after what had happened when they were taken. I told them how we were contacted by Luster, but not even Luster herself knew how she was able to do that. I then explained that we decided to get help from their voice actors (Which I didn't have to explain, by the way. I already told them what 'voice actors' meant when they first got here.). I then told them what happened after we convinced the voice actors to help us. First, Luster teleported all of us here after we convinced the voice actors to help us. I also mentioned on how Tirek's voice actor had a car that was teleported here with us. I then mentioned that we hid in Mark's car when the policemen left the building.

Then, I told them how the plan played out. Luster cast a spell for disguises to appear on us, with magic ID cards to put anyone who sees them in a trance. We also requested for there to be props. As for the voice actors were turned invisible and then stayed in the car. After we got set up, Luster teleported those of us that weren't in the car to the front of the door, along with our chosen props. We had NO idea that we arrived JUST in time to save Cozy.

While I told the story, Sam and Josh finally managed to set Cozy free and take the ball gag out of her mouth.

"Wow..." Chrysalis said when I finally finished. "That was an interesting story."

"I do wonder how Luster was able to perform such powerful spells," Tirek said.

"As I've said before, she doesn't even know how she was able to pull it off!" I replied.

Suddenly, a small sound caught everyones attention.


We all faced the direction and saw the female agent moving a bit more that she should.

She was regaining composure.

"Should we-" Josh started.

"Yeah!" I said.

And one by one, we all bolted out of the room. Chrysalis first. Then Tirek. Then Cozy, Sam, Josh, and finally, me.

As soon as I exited the door, I heard a booming voice behind me.


I picked up speed, and saw the others do so as well.

Suddenly, I heard a loud BANG and felt something whiz past my head, nearly grazing my hair. The woman fired a gun at me!

I heard Cozy yelp a little when the gun was triggered, but she kept running. Everyone else did, too. So that meant we were in the clear.

Again and again, I would hear a gun fire. But every time, the gunfire would miss.

Until it finally got a hit.

I heard Cozy scream "ACK!!!!" and then I saw her stop running. Everyone looked behind in panic, but then I slowed down a little.


Everyone else followed instructions and resumed their run. I quickly went by Cozy and scooped her up. She seemed to be OK, but it would take longer for her to recover.

I picked up the pace again and saw where Cozy was hit. There, on the side of her body, was a very long, red line.

Normally, I would label a reaction to this cut overdramatic. But I could see why Cozy collapsed. She was running fast, and even though the cut was basically a long cat scratch and wasn't severely bleeding, it took her by suprise.

Despite the weight, I caught up with everyone in a jiffy. But I wondered why Luster wasn't doing anything to help us.

Suddenly, a loud blaring alarm went off and the hallway suddenly started flashing red lights.

The woman set off the alarm!

We all continued barreling down the hallway, hoping to escape quick enough.

But finally, we approached the doors. I saw Tirek open it and hold it for everyone to get out.

"GO, GO, GO!!!" he said as we filed out the door one by one.

As soon as I got out, I heard Tirek follow.


Josh opened the tailgate door, climbed on top of it, and started undoing the cover. Once started undoing the tailgate cover, Sam and Chrysalis got in. Once I got there, I gave Cozy to Sam and then waited for Tirek to head over. When he did, I got him to climb up (which was successful for him) and closed the tailgate door.

"What are you doing?" Tirek asked.

"Closing the tailgate," I replied, before I extended my hand. "Now grab my hand and pull me in!"

Tirek quickly grabbed my hand and pulled me up. I looked up and started to see the closed door move. I slammed my palm on the side of the truck.

"NOW!!! GO!!!" I yelled.

Suddenly, the truck started to move, smoke and screeches emitting from the tires.

"EVERYBODY HOLD ON!" Josh screamed.

Everyone with hands grabbed the side of the tailgate. Sam still held Cozy Glow, and Tirek pulled Chrysalis closer since she didn't have hands.

The car raced out of the driveway and started to back away. But I only heard two gunfires from the building, and saw only two streaks of light whiz by.

After that, there was nothing else.

My gaze left the back of the truck, and I looked down at the tailgate ground.

We were finally safe.

Back in Equestria...

Judgement Law smiled at the projection of what he saw. There, the former villains and their 6 human allies escaped the grasp of their government.

"I don't get it..." said the pony who always sits next to Judgement's left. "WHY would we help everyone foil our plans?!?"

"Yeah..." agreed the pony who always sat on the right of Judgement. "Everything would have went our way. WHY would you thwart our plan?"

Judgement just snickered. A yellow glow emitted from his head and suddenly, the three mysterious ponies weren't sitting on their thrones anymore. Instead, they sat in the Canterlot Garden, right in front of a new stone statue of a recently petrified pony.

"You see..." Judgement began. "Eventually, we would all get bored of this victory. We would want to experience the satisfaction of ruling. And we all know we can't just give Equestria back, no matter HOW powerful we are. So I figured... why rule ONE world so you can rule TWO?!!?"

"Wait..." started the left cloaked pony. "Couldn't you have just taken the humans BEFORE they rescued the villains?!?!"

"I wanted to see how devoted they would be... so I came up with a fake plan to allow them to escape with the villains. And these humans... especially the leader one... they have potential to be our one ticket."

"And the former villains?" asked the right cloaked pony. "Should we just have them destroyed again?"

"No..." Judgement said. "We need to steal their power. All we need to do is wait for the right time to go to Earth and confront our foes."

"Seems like a plan," said the left cloaked pony.

Judgement nodded before the three cloaked ponies returned their gazes to Luster Dawn, imprisoned in stone, with fear in her eyes.

Author's Note:

One issue down... one to go.

Our only ally... gone!

Could we be able to defeat Judgement before he takes us?


You can find the poll on my blog.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/879013/poll-should-marble-pie-get-a-future-story-role

This poll will NOT end until criteria is met.

Feel free to make theories on what will happen! And always let the brony or pegasister within conquer your creativity.

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