• Published 10th Nov 2019
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The Dusk of Troubled Views - CartoonopolisAdventures

In this sequel to The Dawn of a New Mission, Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow question the trust of everypony a day after reforming. But when they are banished to an unknown world, the fate of Equestria relies on them... and three bipedal creatures.

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Chapter 13: Messages and Calls

I opened the door to my house and entered, my two friends following suit. Although they weren't as sad as I was that the trio left, they DEFINETLY felt bad for not just me, but them too. How did I know? They both admitted it on the walk home.

I heard Mom practicing the piano downstairs as my friends and I entered. She didn't stop.

Silently, we all went to the couch in front of the TV and sat down to face it.

We were silent and did nothing. For about a minute.

"You know what might make us feel better..." I said. "If I turned on My Little Pony."

Normally, my friends would disagree. But what they did next would shock some.

"I suppose after what happened to us today..." Josh said. "... that we could give it a try."

Sam seemed more hesitant. But he didn't fight back when I grabbed the remote.

I pressed the Netflix button, but then the TV suddenly started swarming with static and colors.

"Oh no..." I said, pressing the button. "Dang TV's busted... I am SO dead!!!"

I continuously pressed the button until the image of a familiar face appeared. A unicorn. My friends and I became confused when the image appeared.

"What the-" I said.

"Hello? Can somepony hear me?" the unicorn said.

"Luster Dawn?" I asked.

"Yes," she said, suprisingly not shocked that I knew her.

"HOW are you communicating with US? Don't you need to be EXTREMELY powerful or something to talk to us?" I replied.

"I know that I had to be powerful to communicate with you," Luster said. "But I tried attempting it anyway! And I was suprised it even worked! Anyway, I figured that communication with your world was the only way to tell the trio that Equestria is in grave danger! You see, this pony named Judgement Law sent Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy to your world. After that, he took over Equestria by turning the Princess and some of her friends into stone! Only I managed to escape before he stole our magic!"

"Hold up!" I said. "How could he do all that magic, and HOW did you know the trio was here?!?!"

"I don't know! He could be extremely powerful for no reason at all!!! And as for how I knew they were here, it took skill. I successfully spied on Judgement and his two helpers at the same time they discovered that the trio was here. So I tried to spy on the trio with my own magic, which is another spell I didn't know I could do. Eventually, when I saw the trio was taken by the police, I decided to try to communicate with you three! When I saw that giant black rectangle on the wall, I figured I would communicate with you THERE since you made it seem like it was a machine. And while it worked, I wonder how it is even POSSIBLE!!!!"

"Wait, are you asking US for help?" asked Josh.

"Yes," Luster said. "Because I also overheard what Judgement planned to do! He was gonna make sure his comrades restrained the magic and flight on the trio, just like what Princess Twilight did when I reformed them. They have no hope! But with the most unlikely creatures to help them, Judgement won't notice a thing!"

"What about our parents?" asked Sam. "What about Leo's mom?"

"Maybe as long as I keep the communication spell open, I can try to use magic to mind control Leo's mom into letting him go and contact the other parents, before putting her to a 24 hour nap!"

"And transport?" Josh asked.

"I can figure out where the trio is and teleport you there. Is there any suggestions of what to add to this plan?"

"Hmmmmm..." I said. "I GOT IT!!!! How about I suggest three allies to help us? I already know who I want to help us, but I'm only doing it for a sense of irony! You can teleport us to a park or resteraunt, and then teleport the three people I suggested there as well."

"Ok. Who do you suggest?" Luster asked.


The former villains were worried about where they were going. They were in a mysterious carriage that was flashing blue and red lights, heading to an unknown location.

"Where are you taking us? What is this thing?" Cozy finally asked.

"This is a police car, which is what we policemen drive. And as for where you're going, I don't exactly know," the policeman grabbing a circle thing replied. "Probably some sort of FBI station where you can get studied? I have one in mind, but it is VERY far from here."


A loud noise startled everyone in the police car, which started swerving and hobbling.

"Drat! The tire must be flat!" the other policeman said.

The police car went to the side of the road and stopped. The two policemen got out of the car and headed to the right side of the car. The trio turned their heads to see what the police were doing, but two seconds after they did, the policemen stood up, glowing blue, and appearing to be in a trance. They turned around, and the former villains could see a cloaked pony come out of the woods, a blue glow on his head.

"Well, now that you got what we wanted, it is time for the next step..." the pony said. "But first..."

The blue glow on the pony got brighter, and suddenly, the trio started to feel weaker.

"There," the pony said, the glow on his horn dimming. "With your magic restrained, you can't escape, even if you wanted to. And you may be wondering WHY you three are still humans! Well, you'll see soon enough! Now as for you policemen, I want one of you to take out that device of yours."

The policeman on the left took out his phone.

"Now, I request one of you to tell me the PERFECT FBI building to take these villains to!"

"There is this one lab in Quantaci, Virginia..." the policeman with the phone said.

"EXCELLENT!!!" The pony said. "Show me an image at once!"

The policeman tapped the device with his fingers for a few minutes until he showed the pony the image.

The pony suddenly increased the brightness on his horn before he disappeared in a flash. It only took a minute for him to reappear.

"Now... I have figured out the number of one of the workers, which I wrote on this piece of paper! I mind-controlled another one of the workers to tell her about the upcoming call. Now, I want you call the number on this piece of paper! Make sure you tell her we are close!"

The pony levitated a piece of paper with a number of it out of his phone.

"It took a while, but I discovered how to contact..." he said to himself as the policeman typed the number on his phone. "Just endless bits of research..."

Suddenly, the phone rang, and the policeman put it up to his ear.

"Hello, yes. This is a call from the police! My comrade and I have found these aliens around town! No, we're not crazy! Listen, you can wait outside the facility and we will stop by! We are not far from there! You can do whatever if we are wrong! We can pay you, you could execute us, anything! Deal? Thanks. Bye."

The policeman took the phone away from his hear and tapped it.

"Excellent..." the pony said. Once again, the glow on his horn got brighter and the imprisoned trio suddenly saw a whole other landscape appear!

The pony teleported them there!

They saw that the policemen were still outside, but the pony was gone. The police car was on pavement, and from what the former villains could guess, was in between two white lines. The lights the vehicle emmitted were still flashing.

The policeman that didn't make the call advanced further to the front of the vehicle.

"Get out of the car and stand in between us," he said. He didn't even look at the captives.

Hesitantly, Chrysalis opened the car door and got out. Tirek followed, and then Cozy. Chrysalis stood next to the policeman on the front, Tirek was next to the one at the back, and Cozy was in the middle.

Five minutes later, the trio saw movement from their right viewpoint, and suddenly saw a female human exit the doorway. When she got closer, the former villains noticed that she was tall and thin. She had black hair, a black formal suit, black sunglasses, and a wire coming out of her ear.

When she was in front of them, she turned to face the three former villains and the two policemen that were still in a trance.

"Uuuuummm..." she said. "I don't think people with weird hair or muscular bodies qualify as 'creatures'".

Suddenly, the policemen took out peculiar looking contraptions, turned to the trio, and backed away. They lifted the devices and pointed them at the trio.

"DROP THE DISGUISES, NOW!!!!!" the policeman near the front of the car screamed.

The trio didn't know what to do. Their magic was restrained, but they were still humans for some odd reason. They weren't sure if they could turn back.

Both policemen slightly turned forward, when suddenly, a loud noise erupted from the devices and pieces of the ground shot up, scaring the former villains greatly. Cozy was on the verge of tears. The trio suddenly knew what those things were. Weapons!

Suddenly, Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy glowed yellow before they were lifted a centimeter off the ground and pulled forward! All three of the former villains knew that it was magic!

"What the-" the woman said.

She was quickly interupted when the trio began glowing green. Slowly, their forms changed. Their hands faded, extra appendages grew, along with other changes to their bodies.

Finally, when the green glow faded, the trio all felt their hooves touch the ground as the woman saw their true forms. Confusion was no longer on her face, but rather amusement.

"Well, well, well..."

Author's Note:

This is the most confusing chapter yet! But I promise all will be explained.

How was Luster able to perform powerful spells?

Who are the three helpers I suggested?

Will there be enough time to save the trio?

You will find out either today or tommorow.


You can find the poll on my blog.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/879013/poll-should-marble-pie-get-a-future-story-role

This poll will NOT end until criteria is met.

Feel free to make theories on what will happen! And always let the brony or pegasister within conquer your creativity.

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