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Toriandthehorse


"A horse doesn't care how much you know until he knows how much you care. Put your hand on your horse and your heart in your hand." ~Pat Parelli

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Nightmare Moon is now the Mare in the Moon. She left feeling bitter, angry, and hurt.
Celestia is now the only reigning monarch left in Equestria. She's left feeling bitter, angry, and hurt.
Arguments between siblings are.. normal. They're bound to happen. And they're bound to make up sometime.
Right?
Perhaps some letters can... help clear things up. Perhaps.


Big special thanks to Ninjadeadbeard, for editing, prereading, and friendship.
*I do not own the coverart

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Comments ( 6 )

Why couldn't they have done something like this in the show?

We are not a pony filled with evil and hate. We are a pony filled with night.

Excellent.

I like it!

Before I read this, I must know: How will Celestia get letters to Luna when she's sealed in the moon?

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Well, it's a world inhabited by multi-colored, talking, magic-enhanced ponies... :raritywink:
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I am very glad you enjoyed!

Hmm. It doesnt seem to have any ups and downs too it. Just letters going back and forth. Kind of flat in my opinion. I think I need something to happen, or maybe read more slowly for a different feeling.

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Thank you for the feedback, and for taking the time to read! I shall definitely keep that in mind for editing this and future chapters.

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