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I roll to see if there's anything useful in the immediate area!

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I thought Shining played Ogres & Oubliettes, not board games.

"Shiny are you using your loaded dice that always fail again?" :facehoof:

I don't normally read these types of fics. But I'll admit it you got me intrigued. I'll stick around then.

I can tell your joy is being poured into this story, it's quite cute and funny. And don't sell yourself short, this first chapter practically feels like it's by a different author, so significant is the improvement.

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Actually, NC did most of the editing for it. Hahaha.

What was before was my usual 'meh'ness.

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Ah. Yeah, editors are helpful, lol. I've never bothered, since my writing style is very methodical, but the downside is that it takes me way longer to finish anything.

I remember a long, long time ago, on raps' Twitter, when he posted the edit of that image that added the camel toe, the comments were all saying "ooh this is the lewdest NC has ever done! Is he falling to the dark side?"
His response? Something along the lines of "it's a very lewd image for a very lewd fic."
Been a fan of both for a long time, so when it turned out the story was by you!?
Well normally I stay quiet, but this is truly a collab to get pumped for.

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Thank you for the kind words.

I needed that.

You may also want to add an Adventure tag since Shining Armor is shrunk and inside a board game.

George Takei voice activated: Oh my

Was that Celestia tag always there?

Oooooh. I see you're doing a D&D collab with Raps as well.

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Aye. It's still being worked on.

The story will be fully written before release. NC and I are going through the second draft together. This has to be the story I've placed the most effort into—and I hope everyone enjoys it.

Thank you for reading so far.
~ Yr. Pal, B

Only a true knight would lose all his limbs and still fight for king and country, but I bet limb dismemberment and severe trauma won't be a part of this story.
All in all, I enjoyed the latest installment in this series. Keep going, good sir, I beg of you.

“Yes! *ha ha* Yes, oh *ha* yes! ” Cadance accented every syllable with fast breaths. “Fight for your princess, brave knight! S-s-save her!” In the distance her foreleg blurred as she fanned herself. “Defeat them all! Prove your love to her! And do that spin again! ”

Haha love that last part.

“It warms my heart to see you battle an army for me! But make no mistake. Where your foes were small... now I am anything but!”

Oh shit she gonna grow larger

The imagery is so detailed that my tiny baby brain could barely comprehend the scenes, but I got there in the end.

Also, I really enjoyed the ending I waited so long for. Amazing.

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